Timberland

Wide the mirrored water stretched,
licking green upon the pointed pines, limbs sweeping low and cool.

The creek meandered, soft giggles escaping mossy rocks
where polliwogs swam, nearly, but not quite frogs, still sporting pubescent tails;
the adults pontificating against the shallow bank,
throats swollen with amphibious wisdom.

Soft brown mud squished, a buttered cream,
between summer toasted toes wading into wonder.
Fragrant evening campfires heightened hungers,
supper roasting over charred coals flavored
the stirrings of a tempting crush on a boy much older;
this girl just barely navigating puberty's powerful push,
his smile extracting heightened pulse, blush brushed.

Life's long summer slipped slowly away
and autumn found his wife and child laying him down,
the plot unknown, unmarked by me;
yet, painful, still, the memory of broken trust,
of love-crust pitched to a not quite woman
deep in the rusting woods of Timberland.

Copyright, February 14, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Faye, nice to see this winning poem. SKAT
Delaney Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Hi Faye: This is so heartfelt. The backdrop of nature to life's real dramas. Added to my Favs list. SuZ
A. Sharma Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:57 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Faye..
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:44 AM
wowowow, this is fantastic, Faye. OH MY, another fave. My second after reading the park poems!!
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February 20, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Faye, Congratulations on your awesome win. Always ~LINDA~
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February 20, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Many congrats on your top-notch win, Faye. Great free verse, Elaine
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