Tim Smith - Im Fartbroken

Continuation of the on going banter and poems posted by some lovely people since I posted my poem Passing Wind yesterday


I’ve been called some things in my life 
A lovely mother and a wonderful wife
But Tim Smith just called a ‘Smelly Tart’ 
From now on I’ll just call him a cheeky old fart

I'M SIMPLY FARTBROKEN TIM


Jan Allison
1st July 2014
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Harrell Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 5:51 PM
What you guys do - stinking up the house for? Somebody needs to teach you etiquette, lol. I think I'll run away from you haha
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 6:02 PM
Just a bit of light hearted banter from my original poem posted yesterday - at least its got people posting poems and comments and having a bit of fun. Hugs Jan xxx
Palmer Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 4:08 PM
lol,funny rhyme,love it,laugh till you fart lol lol,great write Jan
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 5:21 PM
LOL Richard - do read 'passing wind' and the other poems that have stemmed from my silly poem. Hugs Jan xxx
Nance Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Hahaha great, yep Jan you should did start something stinky :)
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 3:17 PM
I know Casarah its great others have joined in too. Hugs jan xxx
Bolton Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 1:29 PM
Heh.Heh Smells in here, phew!
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 3:17 PM
Sure does Jerry and I am responsible for starting the farty theme but others have continued and now blame me hence the reason Im fartbroken:-( Hugs Jan x
Onclaud Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 1:00 PM
a rib-tickler, jan.. i'm in stitches;surely tim too.. huggs
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 3:13 PM
We have had such fun nette you need to write a farty poem too LOL Hugs jan xxx
Andresen Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 12:42 PM
- 'Smelly Tart' .... he teases you ... - Love you both -oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 3:13 PM
I know Anne Lise this has brought some much needed life into the site LOl Hugs jan xxx
Smith Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 12:31 PM
I posted a response..lol
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 3:12 PM
will go see thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 12:22 PM
Oh Jan it was all in good fun...hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 12:28 PM
I Know Tim lol:-) can't believe how this has escalated from my silly poem yesterday others joining in the fun - its awesomeeeeeeeeee. little hug - don't want you expelling any gas now do we! Jan xxxx
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