Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes: This Accentual Meter write on "Occam's razor" was originally written and completed by me on September 14, 2015. "Occam's razor" was first known and spelled as "Ockham's razor" after of William of Ockham (1287-1347) with whom much of this original concept is associated with. Occam's razor is defined and explained as: An identified solution with the fewest assumptions is the one of the most likely to be true. Occam's razor is often equated with the most economical solution. Its essence is that of a "rule of style" rather than one of "logic." In effect, the simplest of solutions may not always be the truest. In many situations dealing with heuristic phenomena, the more complex values, variables or assumptions (hypotheses) should not be discounted, but carefully examined as well. This realism is in consonance more with the vast range of human reality and variety that can't always be tucked away in a package of simplicity with a bow-tie neatly affixed to it. The messy and complex factors associated with certain problems or problem sets often pervade applications and can both affect and effect heuristic explanations predicated on the "simplest of solutions," which may, at times, defy both common sense and logic. I hope you enjoy this poem and its walk-through on tilting (or jousting) at simplicity with its metaphorical overtones and similarity to Don Quixote's adventure of tilting or jousting at windmills (in a similar simplistic vein) as conceived and created by Cervantes' fertile imagination. (Gary Bateman - September 14, 2015) (Accentual Meter)

Categories: computer, history, humanity, judgement, math, science, and technology.

Accentual Meter Calculations and Notes:

Accentual Meter Parameters: 3 to 6 syllables per verse

Total Syllables: 168 out of 210 (maximum)

Total Verses: 35

Total Words: 99 

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Tilting At Simplicity

Tilting at Simplicity

William of Ockham 
Harbinger of today’s
“Occam’s razor”—
His simplest solutions
Bespeak not always
Accurate conclusions.

A Simple Simon
Binary approach
Style vice logic
Solutions not always
Truest to measure
Requires real
Human variety.

Heuristic methods
Abound—of course
Tied to many
Scientific efforts
But how about
The Messy?
The Complex? 

Simple rationale
On each conclusion 
May be suspect
With only barest of
Variables considered. 

Take your pick—but
Use your intuition
The easiest aren’t
Always most correct
Use common sense too!

When in doubt
Trust yourself
Keep objectivity
Fail not to ponder
The complex too!

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, 
(September 14, 2015) (Accentual Meter)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 10:08 PM
Gary, your pen knows no boundaries and can write about any subject and make it interesting and flow. A7
Bateman Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 4:26 PM
Thanks Robert!! Coming from you that's a true compliment. I appreciate your read here and the "7"!!Poems like this one always require some high degree research and intellectual reflection. I try many times to get readers to think about things, themes, or certain situations. But the reality is that poems like "Tilting at Simplicity" are usually not so popular within the PS community. Thanks again!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Trifiatis Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 3:06 AM
Mein freund Gary, willcomen! Your poem took me back to my student's days in philosophy. The ancient Greeks said that to be laconic is to philosophize. When one knows what he wish to say no lenghty writing is necessary. You know that I have been following the advice of your fine poem from the beginning! Excellent writing!
Bateman Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Hallo Herr Professor!! Wir haben in lange zeit nicht gesprochen und geschrieben miteinandern. (I've been on a self-imposed sabbatical for much of September to get caught up on poetry and short stories I'm working on for my second book -- and to take a break too from PS!!) I thought you might end up commenting on this one. I found the information concerning "Occam's razor" to be very interesting indeed!! Thanks for your wonderful comment here!! Always a pleasure to hear from you. I will drop by your site to check out you latest works. Ich bedanke mich sehr!! Cheers, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 3:28 PM
inspiration piece held me to the last gary excellent pen
Bateman Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 4:42 PM
Thanks Liam Mate!! For the read of this unusual quantitative adventure. Chees and Best, Gary
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 2:50 PM
this is some good advice! I enjoyed it, Gary.
Bateman Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Thanks Andrea!! This one is a bit out of the ordinary theme-wise, but it was fun to put together. Thanks for your read and comment!! Cheers, Gary
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