Tilted Dahlias --The Artist

The sage green wall had worn a blank look
until, slightly askew, with a tilt to the left
dangling helplessly, without a complaint 
is the pride of an artist, who lacked all constraints.

He dipped into his paints with no sense of restriction 
hung it in place without hesitation
giving the viewer a crick of the neck.

It hangs precariously, for an eager assessment
without circumspection, neither yes's or no's...
No hemming or hawing just helter and skelter
Instead, a take me or leave me,... is the quick estimation
Conforming was no issue, just pure bold assumption

Excitement exploded from two eager hands
that thrust it in place, with assured restless haste,
hammered a nail with pride and conviction
and planted it there,  with pure ardent fervor

Sharing a warmth of a seasonal decade....
this amateurish, yet delightful landscaped intrusion
sings in the sunshine, and smelling of springtime
shouting with color, and sprinkled with lavender
flavored with turpentine, and oil-painted rainbows

In the lower left corner, is an array of dahlias,
bursting with crimson, never changing or fading
never thirsty for water,
barren of a single, silent, dried up weed
and free of decay, dismay or mold

The amber was gold, the umber was bold, 
          rust to rust, dust to dust......ash to ash

With him he took all the pride that he found
           ...still holding the brush stroke of a satisfied smile 


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For Anthony's Contest: Favorite Artist
Dedicated to someone special in my life  R.I.P.
4/16/14  Revised for Anthony's Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 8:39 AM
Way to go with this creative work..Congrats on your win..Don't know who the artist could be though...Sara
Allison Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 3:09 AM
Beautiful imagery a well deserved winner. Hugs Jan x
A. Sharma Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 11:19 PM
A wonderful write Carrie ! Loved the imagery, a heartful tribute ,,, congrats on a great win !
Guzzi Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 7:19 PM
I so wanted to see the painting! Who was the artist Carrie? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Lawless Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Way to go Carrie. On a second, slower reading I closed my eyes and could almost see the painting, or at least envision those tilted Dahlias. Great win.
Torres Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Congratulations, Carrie!!!! :O) well deserved win... awesome poem for your favorite artist!!! ^_^
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 3:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS CARRIE.. :) GREAT WRITE.. :) i love the imagery.. and the two lines..., olive_eloisa
Sergi Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations Carrie: A beautiful poetic rendition of a dedicated artist A great win!
Walker  Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 1:51 PM
Beautiful Carrie Richards... Congratulations on a first place win... Verlena S. Walker
Callus Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 10:40 AM
What can I say Carrie!!! This is the work of an unconstrained artist...so rich...full, brimming with abundant use of colors and images. (last 2 stanzas a taste of Keats). has to be a fav:) // paul
Callus Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 2:38 PM
congrats on a worthy win :)
Manassian Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 1:23 AM
Carrie...this is beautiful....a work of art in its own right. I'm sorry for your loss. You have the memories to warm your heart, my dear. The whole piece was breathtaking, but those last two stanzas took my breath away, especially the one before the last...The first line of that stanza...encapsulate the artist's heart...as do the last two lines...Your heart...is seen in the whole piece...Your attention to detail...beauty, color, and imagery...Fantastic. You will do superbly well! Hugs
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