Till the Sun Fades

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 5:10 PM
love it : )
Callus Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 4:42 PM
Beautiful! Romantic and somewhat sad. An excellent attempt at an Etheree...waiting for more! // paul
Nance Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 6:14 PM
As your words flow, your after glow glows. :) nice
Muideen Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 11:03 AM
Hum!!!! What a fabulous piece..... Your write flows eloquent within my heart.....a lovely and beautiful write..........A.M.
Pinet Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 10:39 AM
This is very beautiful and so well penned. You managed to nicely capture the suffrage of young passionate love in this poem, creating the ambiance of the moment well. Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 5:34 PM
wowowow, this is amazing for your first attempt. I'm so glad to see a lot of people trying out this form. It's such a cool form! Loved this one.
Curtis Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 5:33 PM
I never attempted one of these, but if I do, I hope I can pull it off as well as you
Raha Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 5:03 PM
an excellent etheree,the lines along with the title describes a sensuous emotion.
Hobson Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 4:16 PM
nice to see you are still glowing, nice piece.
Smith Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 3:37 PM
Beautiful Charma....love the romance only you could bring to this form...a fave....stunning picture too : )
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