Till the Day I Die

In mere, split moments two souls intertwine, 
It is a wonder I could ever possibly call you mine
Yet here you are, an enchanted dream,
Life has its twists—things are seldom what they seem!
I could never ask for anything more,
I am speechless—I love you to the core
At times I contemplate so stiff and still, 
Wondering if this heaven that is you is actually real
You wrapped your tendrils around my heart, 
Your life, your form, is a masterpiece in itself, an art
I, the childish, fearful youth, somehow let you in,
And now all of my fears have left from within
Forgetting all past miseries and tearful  laments,
I have grown so much in a matter of moments
How I am grateful for such a precious soul,
Without you I am empty but now I am whole
You cradled my life in a passion so true, 
I opened a door and the breeze coming in was you  
The stars of night or the brilliant sunrise,
Compare not to your bedazzling eyes
They have seen so much sorrow and endured so much pain,
I wish I could erase all of the bad memories from your brain
But I am merely a girl and only a fortunate few,
Have the opportunity to know of the real you
And if I can, you know I would
Take all of your sorrows away—if only I could. . .
I would lift you far above the mountains on high,
Paint you on every canvas—on every sky
I would show the world below and above,
So everyone could have a taste of your precious love
I never want us to say goodbye…
I promise I will love you till the day I die

-dedicated to Slender Man- ;)
January 5, 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/25/2013 11:42:00 AM
really nice i could read again and again logve the feel to this you have true soul xx davidscott
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Date: 2/20/2013 12:16:00 PM
Love it ;} going to favs .
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/20/2013 9:29:00 PM
Yay! That makes me happy. I'm glad you loved it! ~Laura
Date: 1/30/2013 6:26:00 PM
So nice to read your verse this evening. Light & Love
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/20/2013 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Debbie! ~Laura
Date: 1/30/2013 1:47:00 PM
Such an emotional write filled with the tenderness of a passion beautifully expressed. Hope it is all true and that it belongs to you, it's the right thing to do! Love, Lizzie
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/20/2013 9:28:00 PM
Well, hehe, I suppose we'll see. . thanks a million for reading. ~Laura
Date: 1/22/2013 7:07:00 AM
Deep love! Nice... Terry
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/20/2013 9:24:00 PM
Glad you could read Terry. ~Laura :D
Date: 1/21/2013 3:30:00 PM
Laura, a good dedication... deep and lovely...pd
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/20/2013 9:24:00 PM
Thanks pd. Stay sweet. ~Laura
Date: 1/21/2013 1:02:00 PM
Very expressive work honoring the person of whom you speak..Sara
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/20/2013 9:23:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by! ~Laura
Date: 1/21/2013 12:50:00 PM
We sacrifice and give everything for true love Laura! - A really good poem, thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/20/2013 9:23:00 PM
So true, Anne. (: I appreciate the visit wholeheartedly. ~Laura
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