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Till I Sip My Penultimate Breath

Till my life goes off, Till I stop hearing your mellowing voice, Till my body gets withered, Till my voice is out of moisture, Till my eyelids stop fluttering, Till I stop gaping at the nature, Till my blood gets cold, Till my heart stops throbbing, Till my lips become shrivelled, Till my eyes become dry, Till I fade into your lap, Till I exile into nothingness,, Till your memories stop lingering on me, Till I am bereft of you, Till I await to begin a new expedition, Till I sip my penultimate breath, Till these moments confluence and betide I am not going to forget you.

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Date: 2/21/2016 3:22:00 PM
Vamsi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2015 2:35:00 PM
V S M N, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 6/4/2014 9:01:00 AM
nice write
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