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Till Heart Explodes

he hungered a fierce fervor. slowly an arousal rise of her sunshine. enraptured by dim flitter of bister untamed eyes. a wan breath briefly abandoned by the vision and taste of a single being. 6/27/2020 STRAND COMPLETELY NEW POETRY (1) any form any theme' Poetry Contest Sponsored By: Brian Strand Edward Ibeh invented poem form, Yalto: Line 1 to 15: 3,-4-2,-4-5-3-2-3-2-3-3-5-6-1-5 syllables.

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Date: 7/7/2020 9:02:00 AM
This is stunning, Eve:-) Congratulations on your deserving win!
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Date: 7/1/2020 11:17:00 PM
Superb rendering of the yalto form, Eve. Deeply sensual for me. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 7/1/2020 3:29:00 PM
I loved the word choice used to describe the experience
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Date: 6/29/2020 2:41:00 PM
Witty, beautifully written and with a lot of wisdom. A big big congratulations! Well deserved.
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Date: 6/28/2020 11:37:00 PM
Eve, a very evocative Yalto you have written. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 6/28/2020 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful. Where can I get a pen like you have????? Enjoy your day........
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Date: 6/28/2020 10:41:00 AM
Perfectly sensual. great editing too. Congrats on win.
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Date: 6/28/2020 7:10:00 AM
Great stuff, Eve, each word leads to the next just so... perfectly timed, beautifully delivered.
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