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Till Dawn, My Love

Each leaf of new season I wait the coming dawn just to feel your warmth cast by the stilllness of the sea. Alas, sans you, I am waiting like forever! Serenity envelops me~ each time I cast a soft sigh as I watch the silhouettes of sea birds gently passing by waiting for a breath of new dawn. My love, if I could hold you in my arms once again, I would gladly exchange my thousand lonely nights into one lovely morn just to hold you~ for just anotherday. October 10, 2020

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Date: 10/15/2020 11:21:00 AM
oh this is SO lovely. Wish it got better than HM. I love this.
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Date: 10/10/2020 12:44:00 PM
Such tender yearning spills with lovelorn beauty from your poignant pen, JCB. The nights are long sans the one you love. Your imagery is exquisite with emotion. Congratulations for your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/9/2020 9:40:00 PM
Romanticism interwoven with rich imagery, your poems come like a fresh breath of early dawn.
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Date: 10/9/2020 6:01:00 PM
Hello Dear Poet, Dawn is my favourite time of the day too - serene and calm! "watch silhouettes of sea birds gently passing by.." - what a lovely image! Precious! Keep writing such love poems! Hugs, Mala
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Date: 10/9/2020 6:37:00 PM
Thank you dear poet. Yes, dawn brings an aura of sublime feeling when you feel its coming.

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