Tik Tok Lost Its Pace

Tik Tok Lost Its Pace

When you turned, I got a glimpse of your face,
And then time stopped for me, though you moved ahead...
When I resumed from there of that moment,
It's the playful thoughts only retained and it was so pleasant.....


Now that I'm recalling that moment,
giving words to those scene and events,
The chime of wind which then sing, When you turned back to me,
It Touched your face, blew your curly hairs, then revealed the pleasing face....
And then tik tik lost its pace.... Wou ou aa aa a...


I don't know why, you starred at me,
You spoke aloud or just smiled at me,
I don't understand you left no clues,
Or you blanked me out, no I was fused,
Now that I'm bringing back, to elicit yes I've to trace
Why tik tok lost its pace..... Wou ou aa aa a...

I remember those expressive eyes,
That sharp look like of a spy
I wonder how you adorned them
So blue they were like the sky of heaven,
Do they sing some cosmic song
Yeah it's a spell and it's so strong 

So tik tok lost its pace...
So tik tok lost its pace...
So tik tok lost its pace...
So tik tok lost its pace...Wou ou aa aa a...

~Ashok Kumar Mishra
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Chiri Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 7:39 PM
Enjoyed this very much!;)
Mishra Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Thank you Brenda!
Smith Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 9:41 PM
Sometimes all we can do is smile and try and step onto the escalator and hope we are back in sync. Keep on surprising us with new and exciting work. Regards David in NZ
Mishra Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Exactly!!! You got me.... Thanks for stopping by
Salehi Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 12:10 PM
I have seen somebody and felt the exact thing, but mine was a sour fantasy... I saw her there passing by... Walking graceful, kind of shy... Nicely done... How come you haven't done any work since April... Hope everything is okay...
Salehi Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 12:58 AM
You bet...
Mishra Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 3:29 AM
Thank you Pashang.... I'm glad you find some similar feelings though sour.... But at the end make every thing sweet, that's always desirable.... Everything fine.... My works are incomplete so need to complete them.... Thanks for stopping by!
Warrior Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Very well crafted my friend...time and love...friends or foes?...love & light...^WW^
Mishra Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 12:04 PM
thank you so much for your encouraging words!!!!
One Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 4:32 PM
Great poetry Ashok..
Mishra Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 5:48 AM
Thank you! :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:23 AM
very romantic. I am presuming Tik Tok is the sound of the clock. That makes sense, time stopping! Lovely!
Mishra Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Hey Andrea, yes Tik Tok (tick tock) is the sound of clock... It's like entering into own imagination seeing her and let the bothering about time.... Like the time stopped :) ;)
Faulkner Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 8:31 AM
'then time stopped for me, though you moved ahead' - such a lovely line, very nice write!
Mishra Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 11:44 AM
Thank you Michelle! I see, you caught the line the whole pen based on.... :D kudos
Rose  Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 9:19 PM
Tik Tok nice poem
Mishra Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 11:36 PM
thank you Pixie! :)
Pandit Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 6:59 AM
Lovely poem Ashok..very descriptive and romantic rendering!
Mishra Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thank you Vijay!
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