Tik Tok Lost Its Pace

Tik Tok Lost Its Pace

When you turned, I got a glimpse of your face,
And then time stopped for me, though you moved ahead...
When I resumed from there of that moment,
It's the playful thoughts only retained and it was so pleasant.....


Now that I'm recalling that moment,
giving words to those scene and events,
The chime of wind which then sing, When you turned back to me,
It Touched your face, blew your curly hairs, then revealed the pleasing face....
And then tik tik lost its pace.... Wou ou aa aa a...


I don't know why, you starred at me,
You spoke aloud or just smiled at me,
I don't understand you left no clues,
Or you blanked me out, no I was fused,
Now that I'm bringing back, to elicit yes I've to trace
Why tik tok lost its pace..... Wou ou aa aa a...

I remember those expressive eyes,
That sharp look like of a spy
I wonder how you adorned them
So blue they were like the sky of heaven,
Do they sing some cosmic song
Yeah it's a spell and it's so strong 

So tik tok lost its pace...
So tik tok lost its pace...
So tik tok lost its pace...
So tik tok lost its pace...Wou ou aa aa a...

~Ashok Kumar Mishra

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/14/2020 7:39:00 PM
Enjoyed this very much!;)
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 10/18/2020 10:15:00 AM
Thank you Brenda!
Date: 3/26/2019 9:41:00 PM
Sometimes all we can do is smile and try and step onto the escalator and hope we are back in sync. Keep on surprising us with new and exciting work. Regards David in NZ
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/30/2019 8:24:00 AM
Exactly!!! You got me.... Thanks for stopping by
Date: 9/14/2018 12:10:00 PM
I have seen somebody and felt the exact thing, but mine was a sour fantasy... I saw her there passing by... Walking graceful, kind of shy... Nicely done... How come you haven't done any work since April... Hope everything is okay...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/27/2018 12:58:00 AM
You bet...
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 9/23/2018 3:29:00 AM
Thank you Pashang.... I'm glad you find some similar feelings though sour.... But at the end make every thing sweet, that's always desirable.... Everything fine.... My works are incomplete so need to complete them.... Thanks for stopping by!
Date: 6/5/2018 12:07:00 PM
Very well crafted my friend...time and love...friends or foes?...love & light...^WW^
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 6/7/2018 12:04:00 PM
thank you so much for your encouraging words!!!!
Date: 5/23/2018 4:32:00 PM
Great poetry Ashok..
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 5/25/2018 5:48:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 5/9/2018 8:23:00 AM
very romantic. I am presuming Tik Tok is the sound of the clock. That makes sense, time stopping! Lovely!
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 5/9/2018 10:23:00 AM
Hey Andrea, yes Tik Tok (tick tock) is the sound of clock... It's like entering into own imagination seeing her and let the bothering about time.... Like the time stopped :) ;)
Date: 4/30/2018 8:31:00 AM
'then time stopped for me, though you moved ahead' - such a lovely line, very nice write!
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/30/2018 11:44:00 AM
Thank you Michelle! I see, you caught the line the whole pen based on.... :D kudos
Date: 4/24/2018 9:19:00 PM
Tik Tok nice poem
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/24/2018 11:36:00 PM
thank you Pixie! :)
Date: 4/21/2018 6:59:00 AM
Lovely poem Ashok..very descriptive and romantic rendering!
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/21/2018 7:37:00 AM
Thank you Vijay!
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