Ties That Bind

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Ties that Bind - Canada's History

 
The first train in my city called Bytown, was in 1854 on Christmas day; some off the tracks would stray, and of course, there were many a breakdown. At first the trains were used to move lumber, to meet needs of others; sharing like earth mothers, inside the train lumberjacks would slumber. The city name changed along with the train, from Ottawa people travel; as destinations unravel, one could ride the trains in the snow or rain. Over the years there have been cash problems, a huge station was built awesome; and the train service did blossom, have seen pics of the wonderful columns. It became the Canadian National Railway, and the rest is history; some details still a mystery, but, train travel today is great- I love the sway. As a child I would listen to the train whistle blow, within dreams in a little girl bed; wonderful places I would tread, now, to cities and through wilderness railways go. _____________________ October 13, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/Ties That Bind Copyright Protected, ID 10-1397-149-13 All Rights Protected, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Railroads, A Historical Look Back sponsor BJ Legros Kelley, Judged 11/15/2021 Second Place

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Date: 11/17/2021 4:17:00 PM
Hello dear Constance! Stopping by to congratulate you on your very high placement of your poem 'Ties That Bind' in the poetry contest 'Railroads, A Historical Glance Back'. Thank you for your encouraging soup mail that gave me the courage to run another contest. My panel of judges were there to help me again this time :) Thank you for being a wonderful part of this contest. I look forward to reading more of your artistic creations, and again congratulations! I appreciate you so much! ~BJ <3
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Date: 11/18/2021 8:30:00 AM
BJ, thank you for the inspiration and the contest and my fine placement, and for your compliment and congratulations, and thanks to the BJ team, looking forward to your next contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/16/2021 12:39:00 PM
Congrats on your trophy win!
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Date: 11/16/2021 2:20:00 PM
Karen, thanks for the visit and the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/16/2021 5:49:00 AM
Beautiful history mingled with mystery very interestingly told with a short childhood experience at the end. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/16/2021 9:59:00 AM
Christuraj, thanks for the visit and the compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 1:09:00 PM
You do not get this sway anywhere else so this made sense to me "but, train travel today is great- I love the sway." My father loved trains!
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Date: 10/18/2021 3:35:00 PM
Caren, thanks for the comment, I love the sway of trains too, I would love to take a train across Canada one end to the other ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/15/2021 11:34:00 AM
I love the title of your poem. I grew up with trains going past my yard everyday and when my parents moved they had trains going by everyday and now I live near a train yard and hear them all day long. Must have been meant to live near trains. Nicely written. love phyl
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Date: 10/15/2021 12:32:00 PM
Phyl, thanks for sharing and for the compliment on my poem. I grew up near rail tracks too ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/13/2021 7:26:00 PM
The Title in tandem with the picture is superb, Constance. Best of luck with the poem. :) gw
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Date: 10/14/2021 9:02:00 AM
Gershon, thanks for the visit and comment to my unfinished poem. I lost internet connection just as I was writing it. Everything is back now, so I will finished it today ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
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