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Tie One On

My Daddy was a good man Son of a preacher man When I looked at Paw, I often saw A Bible in his hands Well, he lived a good example Bless his heart, he's dead and gone I wasn't walking in his shoes When I learned to tie one on Lots of whiskey overcame The clean living I had learned To the demon in the bottle 'Seems like overnight I turned My daddy raised me better He taught me right from wrong I wasn't walking in his shoes When I learned to tie one on When they hauled me off to prison I thought they threw away the key Bars and painted women Turned to bars of steel for me Last night I dreamed an angel Spoke my name in solemn tones He said...Here's your daddy's shoes.... boy Learn to tie one on Now it's back to the roots Of an upright family tree Back to the example My daddy was to me I've walked through the darkness But now I see the dawn I wasn't walking in his shoes When I learned to tie one on His shoes are a little big But I've learned to tie one on! Written by Chuck Melugin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/29/2017 9:13:00 PM
Chuck, such beautiful, powerful yet delicate and insightful sentiments in your wondrous song. I love the heartfelt poetic expression of your amazing theme Great ending too, to a great write!
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Date: 5/21/2017 10:26:00 PM
A well tied tale, about an all too common problem.
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Date: 4/22/2017 2:51:00 PM
Very imaginative, powerful and full of emotion. Your words define the heart of poetry, simple and emotionally charged. It has good word choice with rhyme and rhythm and brought a smile to my day. Good work! Emile. $7
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 4/22/2017 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Emile. I appreciate your review so much. I'm glad you enjoyed Tie One On. It is one of my favorites. God bless, chuck
Date: 3/18/2017 12:43:00 AM
Wow! I love this one too. I can hear it now. Definitely "country". lol (IMO)
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 3/18/2017 2:31:00 PM
Thank you Carole, You're right! My best to you, chuck
Date: 3/17/2017 5:53:00 PM
Lovely poem Chuck, i couldn't stop reading. Collins
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 3/18/2017 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Collins, I appreciate your visit. My best, chuck
Date: 2/19/2017 12:53:00 PM
Sounds like you're from the south. Your poem, whether true to life or not, fits nicely into country music lyrics. If you've learned from your mistakes, happy you, Thanks for the stop by, hope my humor gave you a lift. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 2/19/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thanks so much Maurice, for your comment. I appreciate you taking the time to do so. My best, chuck
Date: 2/19/2017 12:01:00 AM
Clever ending to a fine piece of work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 2/19/2017 9:56:00 AM
Thanks, Matthew, for the gracious comment. My best, chuck
Date: 2/14/2017 2:36:00 PM
A fabulous piece, it sings off the page. Cheers! Mo
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 2/14/2017 3:05:00 PM
Thanks so much Mo, for the fine comment! My best, chuck

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