Tie One On

My Daddy was a good man
Son of a preacher man
When I looked at Paw, I often saw
A Bible in his hands

Well, he lived a good example
Bless his heart, he's dead and gone
I wasn't walking in his shoes
When I learned to tie one on

Lots of whiskey overcame
The clean living I had learned
To the demon in the bottle
'Seems like overnight I turned

My daddy raised me better
He taught me right from wrong
I wasn't walking in his shoes
When I learned to tie one on

When they hauled me off to prison
I thought they threw away the key
Bars and painted women
Turned to bars of steel for me

Last night I dreamed an angel
Spoke my name in solemn tones
He said...Here's your daddy's shoes.... boy
Learn to tie one on

Now it's back to the roots
Of an upright family tree
Back to the example
My daddy was to me

I've walked through the darkness
But now I see the dawn
I wasn't walking in his shoes
When I learned to tie one on 

His shoes are a little big
But I've learned to tie one on!

Written by Chuck Melugin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 9:13 PM
Chuck, such beautiful, powerful yet delicate and insightful sentiments in your wondrous song. I love the heartfelt poetic expression of your amazing theme Great ending too, to a great write!
Rodgers Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 10:26 PM
A well tied tale, about an all too common problem.
Pinet Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Very imaginative, powerful and full of emotion. Your words define the heart of poetry, simple and emotionally charged. It has good word choice with rhyme and rhythm and brought a smile to my day. Good work! Emile. $7
Melugin Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 4:07 PM
Thank you Emile. I appreciate your review so much. I'm glad you enjoyed Tie One On. It is one of my favorites. God bless, chuck
Duet Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 12:43 AM
Wow! I love this one too. I can hear it now. Definitely "country". lol (IMO)
Melugin Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 2:31 PM
Thank you Carole, You're right! My best to you, chuck
Cp Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 5:53 PM
Lovely poem Chuck, i couldn't stop reading. Collins
Melugin Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Thanks Collins, I appreciate your visit. My best, chuck
Rigoler Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Sounds like you're from the south. Your poem, whether true to life or not, fits nicely into country music lyrics. If you've learned from your mistakes, happy you, Thanks for the stop by, hope my humor gave you a lift. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
Melugin Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Thanks so much Maurice, for your comment. I appreciate you taking the time to do so. My best, chuck
Anish Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 12:01 AM
Clever ending to a fine piece of work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Melugin Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 9:56 AM
Thanks, Matthew, for the gracious comment. My best, chuck
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 2:36 PM
A fabulous piece, it sings off the page. Cheers! Mo
Melugin Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Thanks so much Mo, for the fine comment! My best, chuck
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