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Tie Dyed Dawn

The smog induced haze bled
	acid
.             
.            NEON
          a tie-dyed 
            Orange 
              dawn

Muffling, p h a n t o m e
.                           foliage

backdropping the
		slllllllllli
.                                        ddddddde
.   of early  R
	  I
	  S
	  E
	  R
	  S

through the low lying

LIMELIGHT

diffusion
	extrusion
		confusion.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/25/2009 5:47:00 AM

What form I had to come back after another cup of coffee. ~~~Awesome~~~ Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/25/2009 5:45:00 AM

Some words were in color BUT we aren't allowed color in the verse, Neon,a tie-dyed,Orange,dawn..is ORANGE and in the shape of an orange....LIMELIGHT is lime green. L & L

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/25/2009 4:36:00 AM

Amazing creativity with this piece Debra..brilliant work.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/24/2009 6:25:00 PM

Very creative. Different. Vince