Tides In Your Eyes

Oh! You have inspired me,
for you have moved my heart,
as I see tides thrashing in your eyes
and an untold story in your heart,
waiting to find its way to my ears,
but in silence you gaze at me,
in waiting here I will be,
for your voice to reach me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 26, 2016 at 9:15 PM
Ravi, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs -- LINDA --
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January 17, 2016 at 3:43 PM
Amazing best loved poem landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. Sara
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January 14, 2016 at 5:05 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Ravi.
A  Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:30 PM
Ravi,, Congratulations on your Best love poem win. Thank you for the support **SKAT**
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March 19, 2014 at 4:26 PM
Hi Ravi. Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA
Mehta Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:44 AM
Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, ravi
Mehta Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:44 AM
Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul,
A  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 10:08 PM
Hi Ravi, you put A lot of Heart And Soul into your writing, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~
Mehta Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 8:10 AM
wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, Ravi
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January 30, 2014 at 12:02 AM
Wow Ravi! This has captivated me right from the title. 'Tides in your eyes' - they say the eyes tell a story of their own, therefore, eyes with tides must encompass a bevy of stories waiting to be told. Well done!
A  Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 1:51 PM
RAVI, <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~
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