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Tides and Waves

The night's breath is mumbling in my mind. Maybe I'd never heard it once in a decade. After this, I must share my story forever. A Gift to a shrinking heart and sea dispatcher Purplish blue-colored waves stimulated the stones. A tasty, rainforest, and never-ending zones. A dazzling fancy tree and a flock of clear birds! By sunset, the shore rises, and wildlife group in girds. A few groups live in congruity with nature. People can live in the wild with no dread to injure. And realize how to transform fresh fish into cash. Mindful of and can stay away from a torrent crush. You're an enormous wave till you strike my soul. Avian exists in the middle of rainfall. Our spirits are lifted by a stroll by the ocean. Rising over anguished seas that can't hang on. Also, shells and footprints in the sea as well. Stunning whales may be seen where they dwell. Golden rays of the sun glided over the brine. Recollections smash alike spear at bowline.
1st place winner Written: August 21, 2021 Writing Prompt, Oceans or Seas - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 1st Place contest winner A Strand (1067) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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La France Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 6:18 AM
Lasaad, beautiful, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Oceans and Seas, love the image ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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August 27, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Thank you so much, Constance; I appreciate you taking the time to comment, as well as read and place my poem; it means a lot to me, and I appreciate your compassion.
Mitra Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 11:04 PM
This one is just amazing.....Congrats on your win Lasaad :)
Poet Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 5:28 AM
Thank you so much, Carol, I appreciate your kindness and delightful comment. Blessings
Skelly Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Ocean and seas make for creative images. Quote:shells and footprints in the sea as well/ Stunning whales may be seen where they dwell. Very nice indeed...Delice
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August 22, 2021 at 11:11 AM
Thank you so much, Delice, for your nice words and intelligent comment. I hope you're having a good weekend.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 10:38 PM
Distinctive description of the sea with its lovely photo. Best for a win.
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August 22, 2021 at 5:02 AM
Appreciate your kind feedback and your nice wishes. Have a wonderful weekend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Hello Tayeb,A beautiful area by the water. Lucky people living there can listen to the waves rushing to shore. A relaxing sound. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 10:57 AM
Hello Taueb,you are welcome my friend. You sent a beautiful scene i can look at it all day long. enjoy your day my friend.
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August 21, 2021 at 4:42 PM
Hi, Darlene, thank you so much for the kind comment, have a great evening.
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