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Tides

As the tides roll in off the sea Erased are the days memories In sand many poems were written Epithets sketched in bare feet- Reading the unwritten- Under the shade of fading willow tree

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Date: 5/27/2014 2:23:00 AM
Beautiful imagery on this poem. We go by the tides, like there is always timing for its rise and fall. Congrats on winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 5/25/2014 5:43:00 PM
Such a beauty to visualize Amy.. An incredibly enjoyable poem, congrats on your well deserved win!
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Date: 5/25/2014 9:07:00 AM
thank you for the comment on my comment about how things are done, around here...PD
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Date: 5/25/2014 4:13:00 AM
congrats on win Amy
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Date: 5/24/2014 6:33:00 AM
Sweet little marvel Amy ,, wonderful ! Congrats on huge win !
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Date: 5/24/2014 12:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win..hugs Verlena
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Date: 5/23/2014 9:26:00 PM
love this little one here. Especially the imagery of the bare feet etching the epithets. congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 5/23/2014 11:26:00 AM
This is such a lovely write, Amy! Much enjoyed. Congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 5/23/2014 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations, Amy, . I hope you don't mind your placement in my contest. Out of past experience, I know many don't like when I don't have a first or second placement. However, this is my judgment, and it only feels right, to place each poem, in the order I would have, as if there had been a first or second placement. Believe me, I'm not taking from you or your winning poem. Hugs, and enjoy my blog, "Conundrum" if you'd like. Have yourself a sweet day. ...always Linda
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Date: 5/24/2014 3:07:00 AM
your contest doesn't matter to me. people get to uptight about placement chill out go with it like it or not hey its your contest
Date: 4/25/2014 9:53:00 AM
Hello Amy, Way above, up above par excellence! Great poem. Thank you for sharing this write! Peace, Deborah
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Date: 4/5/2014 6:26:00 PM
So true. I like metaphorical sands, that that washed away from under our toes, like memories, lost to the erosion of time.
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Date: 4/5/2014 5:49:00 PM
oh i like that a lot, it so relaxing. Very good.
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