Tides

'...the great tide that treads the shifting shore.'
-Edna St. Vincent Millay


Sluggishly the waves steal in like guilty 
lovers, apologetic,
smothering the shore with gentle kisses 
of contrition;
the ocean lies at rest, the surf recumbent, 
apoplectic.

Suddenly the heavens burst, tides no 
longer in remission,
swells that idled now surge into shore
their temper rages,
'sotto voce' once, now they roar like tigers
in their cages!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 5:49 PM
Beautiful images. Love "smothering the shore with gentle kisses of contrition." What a creative way to describe the remorse of a guilty lover. (I'm an Edna St. Vincent Millay fan, too.) You capture her passion in this write! Love, Carolyn
Chircop Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 2:52 PM
powerful and well penned ;-)charma
Shahwan Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 8:35 AM
Beautiful.
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