Tide Rules

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Poetic Form: Verse

Inspired: 2024 August 19

Image: Hilo Koi Ponds

20 Koi Pond Ideas To Create A Unique Garden | I Do Myself

|\V/|\V/|\V/|\V/| \V/|\V/|\V/|\V/| \V/|\V/|\V/|\V/| \V/|\V/|\V/|\V/| \V/|\V/| \V/ \V/ \V/ A place for pockets \V/ \V/ full of miracles \V/ \V/ mini aquariums \V/ \V/ demigods \V/ \V/ dazes of \V/ \V/ darting \V/ \V/ floating \V/ \V/ hiding from awes \V/ \V/ \V/ \V/ The night patrols \V/ \V/ sealife flow \V/ \V/ to and fro \V/ \V/ until a pause \V/ \V/ man-made \V/ \V/ caused ... a light \V/ \V/ to shine bright \V/ \V/ ... clueless eyes \V/ \V/ \V/ \V/ behold the god \V/ \V/ of the tides ... \V/ \V/ \V/ |\V/|\V/|\V/|\V/| \V/|\V/|\V/|\V/| \V/|\V/|\V/|\V/| \V/|\V/|\V/|\V/| \V/|\V/|

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/19/2024 9:48:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative "Tide Rules" write with a great Koi Pond picture. Enjoy your day with fun writing away.............

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/19/2024 10:30:00 AM

I note your signature style at first at bat, thanks much Paula. Aloha William