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Tidal Wave Waltz Poem For Contest

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Waves crashing; then breaking on the beach. Ebbing and flowing tides controlled by moon and earth. Twice a day high tides and low tides; dancing waves enchant for ever more Kim Merryman – Shall We Waltz Contest 06~11~15

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Skat A

Date: 6/18/2015 12:59:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 1:12:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/18/2015 12:09:00 PM

Hey Jan...I must have missed your tidal wave before; glad this win gave me the chance to make amends:) Congratulations!!! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 12:18:00 PM

Thanks Paul I do appreciate you dropping by:-) hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 6/17/2015 11:52:00 PM

Not sure how I missed this continual waltz of waves. Congratulations on the contest placement. I love it! A definite 7 from me.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 1:05:00 AM

Thanks Janet it was a fun contest to enter:-) Hugs Jan x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2015 11:16:00 PM

gosh I had no idea you had done this one, Jan. I really like it. Congrats on a great win. Love the pic too.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 1:05:00 AM

Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 6/17/2015 8:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 1:04:00 AM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/17/2015 8:18:00 PM

Jan, congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest! Your words created a lovely picture and your poem had a nice flow to it. Well done! Love, KIm

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 1:04:00 AM

Thanks so much Kim I am delighted you liked my poem - it is a lovely form you brought to us:-) Hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 6/17/2015 5:51:00 PM

Wonderful write Jan...Congrats on your win

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2015 1:03:00 AM

Thanks so much Joseph:-) Hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/14/2015 1:35:00 AM

Jan, I am riding the waves with your poem.. =)~Olive Eloisa

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2015 8:10:00 AM

Thanks so much Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 6/12/2015 10:05:00 AM

This is SO lovely, dear Jan!! I loved it!! All the best!! :D :D

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2015 2:47:00 PM

Thanks so much Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 6/11/2015 8:31:00 PM

Nice write, good luck in the contest a winner Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2015 2:46:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 6/11/2015 1:51:00 PM

Love watching the waltzing waves Jan, so so soothing even though their sounds can be like thunder. Good luck in the contest, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 1:52:00 PM

It is mesmerising watching them dance James:-) hugs Jan xx

Md Johnson

Date: 6/11/2015 10:58:00 AM

Very well done. Enjoyed immensely.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 1:30:00 PM

Thanks so much Michael:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene Gifford

Date: 6/11/2015 7:49:00 AM

I loved your waltz of the waves contest entry, Jan. May you dance into victory. Blessings, Darlene

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 8:00:00 AM

I have two left feet I may stumble at the first hurdle lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 6/11/2015 7:01:00 AM

Not only good it actually tells a breathtaking story and is uniquely written. Looks like a big winner to me...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 7:46:00 AM

We will wait and see Judy as you know the sponsors can make some interesting choices but it is all subjective ! Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/11/2015 12:46:00 AM

Lovely, Jan. I love it all. Makes me want to be by the Mediterranean...Correction...makes me want to swim in the Mediterranean. Soon!!! :) Thanks for the lovely poem. Hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 1:35:00 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment so lovely to see you back here - am still smiling for you! Hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/10/2015 10:35:00 PM

Being a boater, I am quite aware of the tides. It really is a fascinating phenomenon. Great job, Jan! Good luck in the contest :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 1:32:00 AM

Thanks Laura it is fascinating except when we get VERY high tides and there are properties that have been flooded in recent years - in the North of the Island it was so bad in one place there was a man canoeing along the high street - but this is thankfully rare! hugs Jan xx