Tickle

The suns bright rays,
they tickle my nose
make me sneeze,
   ACHOO!
The feather so soft,
it tickles my toes
makes me laugh,
   WAHOO!
The hand so gentle
it tickles my soul 
makes me say
   I DO!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Higgins Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 8:07 AM
I love this..love the last line...a nice smile.
Devonshire Avatar
June 19, 2009 at 3:39 PM
This is so uplifting, Trudy! Love the last verse. Very nice, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
June 19, 2009 at 3:30 PM
A delightful poem Trudy, gave me a little chuckle>>James
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