Tickets

There it sat staring my way Shiny and silver with grey. They were yelling my name but those tickets aren't the same Now a days.
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January 9, 2012 at 7:42 AM
Hi Cory...hey hope u are doing well in OT school..I am completely proud of u gal...This limerick contest had me stumped for days..what to write...I don't gamble..Yours on the other hand.,,,,it jumps out at ya..lol..You gave that ticket some lungs and a heartbeat here. Cool. Best of luck, Gwendolen
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January 8, 2012 at 8:45 AM
different,,and wonderful,,i wish i could write like you,,,but im learning,,,i have a long way to go...
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January 7, 2012 at 5:45 PM
Interesting work..Can't decide the exact interpertation though..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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January 5, 2012 at 6:47 PM
Good luck in the contest with your great limerick. Thanks for your kind comment on my poetry. Love, Joyce
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January 3, 2012 at 6:27 PM
Wishing you luck with those tickets, Cory!!
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