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There it sat staring my way Shiny and silver with grey. They were yelling my name but those tickets aren't the same Now a days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/9/2012 7:42:00 AM
Hi Cory...hey hope u are doing well in OT school..I am completely proud of u gal...This limerick contest had me stumped for days..what to write...I don't gamble..Yours on the other hand.,,,,it jumps out at ya..lol..You gave that ticket some lungs and a heartbeat here. Cool. Best of luck, Gwendolen
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Date: 1/8/2012 8:45:00 AM
different,,and wonderful,,i wish i could write like you,,,but im learning,,,i have a long way to go...
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Date: 1/7/2012 5:45:00 PM
Interesting work..Can't decide the exact interpertation though..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:47:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with your great limerick. Thanks for your kind comment on my poetry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/4/2012 3:15:00 PM
tickets to what?
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Date: 1/3/2012 6:27:00 PM
Wishing you luck with those tickets, Cory!!
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