Tick Tock

Will the last to leave please turn out the sun.


©2/9/2018

submitted to – The doomsday clock 2 minutes to midnight – Poetry contest
sponsor – Emile Pinet

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Normie Payton

March 7, 2018 at 12:16 AM

Great one liner, John.

Andrea Dietrich

February 10, 2018 at 8:16 PM

Oh this is really cute!!! sure do with I had thought of it. It reminds me of this movie I saw where the whole world is waiting for the world to end and then you see the blinding light of the sun coming right at the earth and swallowing up the people in the movie. Something like that but i totally forgot the title of that thing.

Tom Cunningham

February 10, 2018 at 5:40 AM

A frigtening thought John, I live in hope that someone can stop the clock. Good luck in the contest. Regards Tom.

John Lawless

February 10, 2018 at 10:08 AM

It seems that all any are willing to do is to hit the "snooze button"....

Jan Allison

February 9, 2018 at 5:47 PM

ouch - so few words say so much John - I'm sure I will be long gone before the sun stops shining unless DT gets his hand on the big red button:-( hugs jan xx

John Lawless

February 10, 2018 at 10:12 AM

hey Jan, look what happened to the dinosaurs....and they didn't have any fingers...

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