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Tic Toc

Upon the wall
It hangs
counting
metronomic moments
lost
to time


John G. Lawless
©9/24/2022

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Date: 10/2/2022 3:37:00 PM
Cuckoo Time 1 flew over John Tik , Tok Lost
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Date: 9/25/2022 5:51:00 PM
if there was a first, this was a close second :-)
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Date: 9/24/2022 9:38:00 PM
COOL!!
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Date: 9/24/2022 6:02:00 PM
...nice....the tic-toc coming and going..... but the now point is an infinite.....wowza.. ......stans sand
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Date: 9/24/2022 5:45:00 PM
John love your take on the Clock clever way of expressing. Thanks for sharing.
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