Tic Toc

Upon the wall
It hangs
counting
metronomic moments
lost
to time


John G. Lawless
©9/24/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Flaherty Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 3:37 PM
Cuckoo Time 1 flew over John Tik , Tok Lost
Kyser Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 5:51 PM
if there was a first, this was a close second :-)
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 9:38 PM
COOL!!
Blown Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 6:02 PM
...nice....the tic-toc coming and going..... but the now point is an infinite.....wowza.. ......stans sand
Tor Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 5:45 PM
John love your take on the Clock clever way of expressing. Thanks for sharing.
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