Richard Lamoureux Poet Rhyme

Tic Tac Toe Tornado

I’m ready for
Tic Tac Toe
Cause I got
my own rhymes to show
Watch me shine
My X’s are always in a row
Can you feel the room react
as it feels my glow
The Tickity Tac Tac
Clackity Clack Clack
Ricky Rhyme Time Show

My measures 
don’t need tethers
I’m the man
for any kinda weather
High or low pressure 
I’m a national treasure 
No cold front here
Just sunshine and pleasure
No need for a sweater 
Cause Baby 
you rock that leather

You can’t stop
Fast and Furious
I’m the White Tornado
Bright enough for New York City
Cool enough to cruise Colorado
Driving my tricked out Eldorado
Others can brag
I show and tell
My musical bravado

Now it seems Trim the Trimmer
Has served me up for dinner
His words more potent
Than 100 proof liquor 
They percolate and simmer
Rhyming sub-textually
Flowing quicker and quicker
Always the right mixture 
So as his Rhymes grow brighter 
Mine grow dimmer
Time to throw down the mike
and declare Trim the Trimmer
the Tic Tac Toe Award Winner.



Ricky Rhyme Time Rides again
Dedicated to The Rhyme Master Trim.
Just having a bit of fun playing in his sand box.


Inspired by Nick Trim’s “Trim Trimmer Chicken Dinner Winner”.

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Anne E Sangster - K July 26, 2021 at 5:35 PM A fun piece Richard. I couldn't help but smile as I read each line. :-) Cheers Anne Richard Lamoureux July 27, 2021 at 6:33 AM Thanks Anne, it was a fun one to write.

Juliet Ligon June 19, 2021 at 2:23 PM Enjoyed your explosion of rhymes.

Nick Trim March 26, 2021 at 12:56 PM My gosh what a humbling read, absolute perfection Richard!! I loved it!! I'm not sure how I managed to miss this when it was posted but I'm glad you pointed it to my attention!! Takes me back to when Brenda got in the middle of our head to head!! Thoroughly enjoyable, well done!! Richard Lamoureux March 26, 2021 at 2:39 PM So pleased you enjoyed it Nick. Like our last go around it was fun to write. Blessings Richard.

Angela Crabtree March 14, 2021 at 3:47 PM A well written piece, Richard. I enjoyed it :) Richard Lamoureux March 22, 2021 at 7:13 AM Thanks Angela. Hugs Rick.

Joanna Daniel March 13, 2021 at 1:17 AM What a cool fun write, Richard, almost like rap taps:) enjoyed thoroughly:) Richard Lamoureux March 13, 2021 at 6:49 AM Thanks again Jo. Blessings Rick.

Paul Callus March 9, 2021 at 9:56 AM A most pleasant and entertaining rap poem, Richard :) Where rhyme is concerned you're second to none!! Best regards // paul Richard Lamoureux March 10, 2021 at 5:06 AM Thanks Paul, much appreciated!

Beryl Edmonds March 8, 2021 at 11:28 AM Wow! Rick that’s some rap, the fastest read I’ve ever had, and definitely don’t need a sweater. Great read, loved it ~ Belle Richard Lamoureux March 8, 2021 at 10:43 PM Thanks Belle. ;0)

Brandy Nicole March 7, 2021 at 9:32 PM You make Tic Tac Toe sound so exciting. "Cause I got my own rhymes to show, watch me shine" I am watching and smiling, all at the same time. This is so cute, clever and creative. :) Brandy Richard Lamoureux March 8, 2021 at 6:47 AM Thanks Brandy, it was fun to write.

Gordon Mcconnell March 7, 2021 at 12:36 PM Really makes one smile Richard, so well written indeed. Blessings,Gordon Richard Lamoureux March 7, 2021 at 12:41 PM Thanks Gordon, I’m glad I could bring a smile.

Victor Buhagiar March 6, 2021 at 11:03 PM Loved your poem. Great tempo with great rhymes. And a funny slant. Richard Lamoureux March 7, 2021 at 6:54 AM Thanks Victor, I’m pleased you enjoyed my attempt at Rap.

Michelle Faulkner March 6, 2021 at 11:16 AM Your rhymes are so creative and fun to read - here I think I like 'cruise Colorado/in my tricked out Eldorado' the best' - I would crown you the winner :) Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2021 at 12:06 PM Ha ha, thanks Michelle. ;0)

Gershon Wolf March 4, 2021 at 5:29 PM Great fun here, Richard. A gas, as we used to say. Thanks for the smiles, gw Richard Lamoureux March 5, 2021 at 5:25 AM My pleasure.

Harry Horsman March 4, 2021 at 1:12 AM Wow a super wind rush here, Don't know Nick, must seek him out. Richard Lamoureux March 4, 2021 at 6:31 AM Thanks Harry, just a bit of silly fun. I won’t be giving up my day job to start my Rapping Career. ;0)

Alexis Y. March 3, 2021 at 11:43 AM WoW! Richard, You've penned a well-written dedication piece to Nick. I'm sure he will like it. Have a great day:-) Alexis Richard Lamoureux March 3, 2021 at 10:37 PM Thanks Alexis. I did have a nice day. ;0)

P.S. Awtry March 3, 2021 at 10:15 AM What fun! I thought of Tim before you mentioned him. What a nice tribute! Richard Lamoureux March 3, 2021 at 10:38 PM Thanks my friend.

Tom Cunningham March 3, 2021 at 7:59 AM Lovely dedication to Nick, Richard, he'll love this. Tom Richard Lamoureux March 3, 2021 at 10:39 PM Thanks Tom. ;0)