Thy Self

He can not answer this for her
The tides deterged are clear
Their feelings on a pendulum
Is something both so fear

To sail the seas around the world
Expecting not a storm
A pleasant voice without complaint
Unable to perform

Emotions let one's feelings out
Don't bottle them inside
A balance keeps one's measure poised
Contentment to abide

When chaos hits its not too late
Maintaining self control
To trust in Him and not on self
Submit one's heart and soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/14/2015 12:30:00 PM
I have re you wonderful words I find there is a few I like but this one really hit me in the right spot as Tanya so beautifully point out and I agree and say God's blessings to you always Sam
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Thomas Carney
Date: 12/15/2015 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Rev. Dr. Mack, I appreciate you taking time to read this poem. Thomas
Date: 3/23/2015 5:49:00 PM
To maintain self control,and to let our feelings flow are a great advice in your powerful poem...Excellent!Charma
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Thomas Carney
Date: 3/25/2015 2:49:00 PM
Thanks for reading it CC. Have looked in the mirror many times.....every day in fact. Thomas
Date: 2/21/2015 11:56:00 PM
I love this. Starting with the take on matters hard to answer but deftly maneuvers inclusion of a loved one in the dilemma on how to handle life's tests as they journey through life. Ends with power as the ultimate solution with Him is found. 7+++. I love your poem, Thomas. Smiles. :D Kim
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Thomas Carney
Date: 2/22/2015 7:55:00 AM
You are too kind Kim, but you nailed the meaning of the protagonist's expression. Thanks....Thomas
Date: 1/16/2015 11:23:00 AM
I like the range that this poem can be applied to. An excellent, open write. And 'expecting not a storm' and introspection. Unfortunately, most cant see beyond their 'self'. Glad I found this one.
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Date: 1/17/2015 11:56:00 AM
Thanks rob. I am glad you found it as well. Even one comment from a reader makes posting here worthwhile. Peace 2U. Thomas
Date: 1/12/2015 6:43:00 PM
stunning piece of writing thomas love how this drew for me excellent pen dear friend
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Thomas Carney
Date: 1/13/2015 6:25:00 AM
Liam Pleasure is mine my friend. Thanks for reading Thy Self. Thomas
Date: 1/12/2015 1:11:00 PM
Author Notes: Was not sure what to say as far as type of poem as I saw no correct heading. The poems is Common Meter, alternating iambic tetrameter and trimeter with abcb rhyme pattern The poem is about a relationship, introspection, conflict with "self" and what is a good resolve >?
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