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Thy Celestial Way

The shadows of doubt were following me since my life’s dawn Overcastting my thoughts as not to find the place that I belong But Thou, my Lord, have shown me Thy everlasting celestial way: Unconditionally to love every being of your creation to this day For that my heart everlastingly Thy glory would thankfully sing Continuously working the desired peace on this planet to bring © Demetrios Trifiatis 15 August 2014 *Commemorating my reaching the age of Socrates!

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/18/2015 8:05:00 AM

Life, is sometimes so hard to be able to stay on the right path. Wonderful write :) Blessings dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/18/2015 8:48:00 AM

Thank you my sweet sister, in Christ! God bless you!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/23/2014 5:18:00 AM

Belated b'day wishes Demi!! This poem of faith was fittingly posted on reaching another important stepping-stone in life; may many more years follow. Have a nice day! // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/25/2014 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Paul so much for your wishes and your visit! God bless you!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/22/2014 4:39:00 AM

:) glad I tumbled at Dave's poem..:) only crumbs and saw your comment..:) I see you back.. I'm glad..:)!! I just know Socrates as a philosopher but don't know his age..:D

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2014 5:10:00 AM

Thank you so much, Olive, for the visit and comment! Glad to see you too! Socrates, 469-399 BC. I refer to Socrates because I am a Dr. of philosophy and I am Greek. Unfortunately, I equal only his age, never will approach his wisdom!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 4:39:00 AM

Yours second couplet ..:) wow!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/21/2014 8:25:00 AM

I like the thought of reaching the age of Socrates. The age of Demetrios will be your crowning glory.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2014 5:12:00 AM

Richard my friend, thank you for your visit! As far as your comment is concerned, if you mean what I think you mean then you are absolutely right! However, let HIM decide! Thank you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2014 9:32:00 PM

Hello Demetrios, yes, it is wonderful to see you here. I am not being on much these days. I am much in deep, with the reality and grasp of this poem. The first set of lines, are amazing. I'm still looking for my way... Have a nice day...Linda

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/18/2014 10:29:00 AM

Thank you PD, your visit certainly makes my returning worth while. A person like you will always find her way! Have a wonderful day and hope to see you soon!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2014 9:16:00 PM

hmmm, now you have me curious to google the age of Socrates. This is REALLY nice. so glad to see you back!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/17/2014 3:31:00 PM

Andrea, my dear, if you didn't google it yet the answer is: 469-399 BC. Do your months! Ha-ha! Thank you for your visit.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/16/2014 5:53:00 PM

As always this is a beauty of a poem. Glad to see you here. Many blessings always... Lucy

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/17/2014 3:33:00 PM

Lucy my fiend, glad to see you are fine! Thank you!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/16/2014 5:14:00 PM

a lilting song only you can design, D... wishing you a great birthday which will outdo Socrates'... amazed!.. huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/17/2014 3:29:00 PM

Nette, how lovely to see you again! Thank you!

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/15/2014 10:11:00 AM

Heyyyyy Demetrios! Welcome back :) Knew you couldn't leave. Your heart strings are tied to us, my friend lol. Love ya

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/15/2014 10:19:00 AM

Ah, there is a familiar face! Thank you so much dear Toquyen. Thank you for your warm welcome!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/15/2014 6:17:00 AM

Wonderful my friend and birthday wishes to you..cheers Tim

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/15/2014 10:17:00 AM

Thank you Tim, so great to hear from you!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/15/2014 5:27:00 AM

Khronia Pola. Happy birthday, Demetrios. Wishing you all the best. Good to read you again. May you live long past Socrates' age...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/15/2014 5:41:00 AM

Thank you Eileen for your wishes, you are so kind!