Thwarted

cauliflower rocks
block my setting foot in sea
under sky's peach glow

For Raul Moreno's Champagne Skies contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:43 PM
soft haiku
Nunn Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:11 PM
Good write, sure does paint a picture...thanks on News..Danny
A  Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Hi Andrea! I can't believe I missed this one. My husband band my Lap top at work. What an A-hole. I still like him . He is evil . He says I got a bit addicted. You think . I heard esthers back is it true. Enjoyed your haiku.
Knop Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Another nicely penned Haiku, Andrea! And congrats on yours beeing successful!...Love, Gert
Devonshire Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your success, Andrea! Great interpretation of Raul's photograph. Love, Carolyn
White Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 1:52 PM
Nice Andrea Congrats- those were cauliflower rocks
Freeman Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 8:20 AM
A brilliant picture of light, Andrea, Awesome job. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 8:18 PM
Fine images. Congrats
Haick Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 11:39 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Andrea! Thanks for the comment, also!! Peace, love, Audrey
Owens Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Very nice Haiku...Congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty
Fraser Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 8:40 AM
Andrea, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest > kool descriptives in your fine words >> James
Knop Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 7:50 AM
My congratulation, Andrea! Too often we do miss a champagne sky! Thank you for your welcome comments and have a great Easter holiday...Love, Gert
Sweetheart Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 7:05 AM
Another big congrats Andrea my friend on your HM in the Champagne Skies contest.. a beautiful Haiku and honor for u to enjoy as we trot to the winners circle yet again..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Andrea. Love Carol
Villarosa Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 4:20 AM
Nice imagery and enjoy your winning this contest, Andrea. (^_^) Noel.
Moreno Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 1:06 AM
Andrea, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
Frew Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 7:39 PM
wonderful,thanx!ps,good luck in contest.
Kendrick Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Great descriptive write that should do well in the contest...Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Haick Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 2:32 PM
Good imagery depicted with these words, Andrea..looks like a winner to me..I wish you good luck in the contest....Peace, love, audrey
Brown Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 1:55 PM
It was a pleasure to read the poetry you presented today Andrea and I wish you the best in Raul's contest. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 11:47 AM
New contest Andrea ..Lull-a-bye.. u interested? I just submitted.. Ninna Nanna Italian for Lullaby.. oh well got to be creative ya know... also have a new blog about poetry...luv.happy weekend..Linda-Marie..
Cheeseman Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Rich and warm well done Andrea, fine piece Daniel
Guzzi Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 11:08 AM
ohhhhhhh peach glow..very warm! Light & Love
Byrne Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 11:36 PM
nice one!
Ryerson Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 8:03 PM
'cauliflower rocks'...wish I woulda' thought of that!...VERY nice and unique take on Raul's picture, Andrea! - Tim
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