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Thwarted

cauliflower rocks
block my setting foot in sea
under sky's peach glow

For Raul Moreno's Champagne Skies contest

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:43:00 PM

soft haiku

Danny Nunn

Date: 3/31/2010 8:11:00 PM

Good write, sure does paint a picture...thanks on News..Danny

Skat A

Date: 3/31/2010 6:12:00 PM

Hi Andrea! I can't believe I missed this one. My husband band my Lap top at work. What an A-hole. I still like him . He is evil . He says I got a bit addicted. You think . I heard esthers back is it true. Enjoyed your haiku.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/31/2010 5:05:00 PM

Another nicely penned Haiku, Andrea! And congrats on yours beeing successful!...Love, Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/31/2010 1:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your success, Andrea! Great interpretation of Raul's photograph. Love, Carolyn

Mitch White

Date: 3/30/2010 1:52:00 PM

Nice Andrea Congrats- those were cauliflower rocks

John Freeman

Date: 3/30/2010 8:20:00 AM

A brilliant picture of light, Andrea, Awesome job. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2010 8:18:00 PM

Fine images. Congrats

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/28/2010 11:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Andrea! Thanks for the comment, also!! Peace, love, Audrey

Marty Owens

Date: 3/28/2010 10:40:00 AM

Very nice Haiku...Congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

James Fraser

Date: 3/28/2010 8:40:00 AM

Andrea, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest > kool descriptives in your fine words >> James

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/28/2010 7:50:00 AM

My congratulation, Andrea! Too often we do miss a champagne sky! Thank you for your welcome comments and have a great Easter holiday...Love, Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2010 7:05:00 AM

Another big congrats Andrea my friend on your HM in the Champagne Skies contest.. a beautiful Haiku and honor for u to enjoy as we trot to the winners circle yet again..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2010 5:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Andrea. Love Carol

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/28/2010 4:20:00 AM

Nice imagery and enjoy your winning this contest, Andrea. (^_^) Noel.

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/28/2010 1:06:00 AM

Andrea, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Bill Frew

Date: 3/27/2010 7:39:00 PM

wonderful,thanx!ps,good luck in contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2010 6:17:00 PM

Great descriptive write that should do well in the contest...Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/27/2010 2:32:00 PM

Good imagery depicted with these words, Andrea..looks like a winner to me..I wish you good luck in the contest....Peace, love, audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/27/2010 1:55:00 PM

It was a pleasure to read the poetry you presented today Andrea and I wish you the best in Raul's contest. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/27/2010 11:47:00 AM

New contest Andrea ..Lull-a-bye.. u interested? I just submitted.. Ninna Nanna Italian for Lullaby.. oh well got to be creative ya know... also have a new blog about poetry...luv.happy weekend..Linda-Marie..

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 3/27/2010 11:41:00 AM

Rich and warm well done Andrea, fine piece Daniel