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Thursday Again

That old familiar rumble once again has begun Weekend pulling closer no matter how hard I push Breathe in… breathe out; stomach burns like the sun Mom and Dad gearing up for one more bruising run Trusted closet stands ready for my weekend escape Ears filled with cotton only muffle the hate My spirit impaled on the thorns of their pain Breathe in… breathe out; it’s Thursday again Based loosely and somewhat darkly on the Figurative Artiste Stephanie Deshpande painting "waiting"

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Date: 2/26/2014 8:54:00 PM
David, I can't believe I didn't stop by your page to congratulate you! So, first a very very late congrats. Second, hold on to your hat, this has never happened on the soup before, but the artist has blogged about the winners and has added a link on HER page back to these poems... so your work will be appreciated by someone outside of the walls of soup! If you'd like to read more, add comment with the other winners, go to my blog, See blog link top right in corner. Good stuff and great entry!
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David Mohn
Date: 2/27/2014 1:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Cyndi - I will check out your blog

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