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Thursday

What do yall think about changing, the name of Thursday to Friday's eve? so it almost feels like Friday? Just a fleeting thought. Don't tug on Aqua man's fin, Don't get caught on judgement day in sin Don't touch a hungry man's food, friend And don't mess around with a sanctified crowing hen!! I know lame---real lame!!

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Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/3/2010 10:01:00 AM

Quite funny, interesting and a thought provoking write as well. Thanks for your kind comments on the series poem Vasava. Love and best wishes,..... Ravindra... Doris Culverhouse

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/1/2010 3:12:00 AM

Funny and interesting write, Doris! Have a nice weekend and thank you for your comments...Gert

David Byrne

Date: 4/30/2010 5:36:00 PM

interesting thought all the same..............

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/30/2010 11:52:00 AM

Doris ..is this a "GO" yet? am so ready to re name it...luv.. happy weekend.. Linda-Marie

John Freeman

Date: 4/30/2010 10:59:00 AM

Not at all lame Doris, but quite witty. Smile. Agape, Moses

Brittany Moon

Date: 4/30/2010 9:01:00 AM

poetry is for epressing different things, and for that i say this: NEVER think that any of your writes are lame...poetry is of what the writer thinks and feels, keep that pen flowing no matter what...God Bless...~Brittany

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/30/2010 5:06:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem today, Doris! Thank you for your comments and have a nice weekend...Gert

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/29/2010 8:53:00 PM

I enjoyed the poem

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/29/2010 5:47:00 PM

Sounds great to me Doris.. I just posted a new blog about favorites on Fridays so this fits right in too.. and let me be the first to give your idea a green light...luv.. Linda-Marie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/29/2010 3:46:00 PM

Limerick writing Irish chick...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2010 2:25:00 PM

no well done well done, pills Doris pills, j.k., have a nice FRIDAYS EVE,..p.d.