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Thunder-Crack

thunder-crack  boomed -
the potent electricity
shrieking inside me
every neuron firing up
danger in one thunder-crack

6/14/2022
Bite Size Poem no.46
Spinsor:Line Gauthier

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2022

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Victor Buhagiar

June 15, 2022 at 1:56 AM

Line might be afraid of thunder :) Hugs

June 15, 2022 at 6:03 AM

lol…it was a doozy! Like nothing else I’ve heard thus far!

June 14, 2022 at 8:57 PM

I can feel the power of the thunder crack ! A great entry for the contest, Kim ! All the Best !

June 15, 2022 at 6:03 AM

Thank you, Valsa!

June 14, 2022 at 5:15 PM

You are a 'natural woman,' Kim! ~ Greased Lightning

June 14, 2022 at 6:18 PM

Too funny…oh madman ;)

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