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Thunder Thighs

A girl with a full figure. Hated to be bigger . Stopped sweets and pies . Hoping to lose layers of booty and thunder thighs. Unfortunately, she was enlarged by a picker .

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Kholoud Hussain

Date: 8/30/2021 2:02:00 AM

Hoping to lose thunder thighs, is not as strong in meaning and doesn’t help with the metaphor as it was written. I agree with the poet.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/28/2021 1:17:00 AM

Though the forth line should be short like line three, I liked this limerick.

Mohamed Omar
Date: 8/28/2021 3:40:00 AM

Thank you for your critique ,you are right but I felt it this way .