Mohamed Omar Poet Limerick

Thunder Thighs

A girl with a full figure.
 Hated to be bigger .
   Stopped sweets and pies .
     Hoping to lose layers  of  booty and  thunder thighs.
       Unfortunately, she was enlarged  by a picker .

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Kholoud Hussain August 30, 2021 at 2:02 AM Hoping to lose thunder thighs, is not as strong in meaning and doesn’t help with the metaphor as it was written. I agree with the poet.

Victor Buhagiar August 28, 2021 at 1:17 AM Though the forth line should be short like line three, I liked this limerick. Mohamed Omar August 28, 2021 at 3:40 AM Thank you for your critique ,you are right but I felt it this way .