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Thunder Thighs

A girl with a full figure.  Hated to be bigger . Stopped sweets and pies . Hoping to lose layers  of  booty and thunder thighs.   Unfortunately, she was enlarged  by a picker .

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Date: 8/30/2021 2:02:00 AM
Hoping to lose thunder thighs, is not as strong in meaning and doesn’t help with the metaphor as it was written. I agree with the poet.
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Date: 8/28/2021 1:17:00 AM
Though the forth line should be short like line three, I liked this limerick.
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Mohamed Omar
Date: 8/28/2021 3:40:00 AM
Thank you for your critique ,you are right but I felt it this way .

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