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Thunder Roars

thunder roars from storm clouds overhead angry voices for Charles Henderson's Haiku vs Senryu contest

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Deb Radke

Date: 1/26/2011 8:06:00 PM

It sounds like that sometimes, doesn't it? As though the sky is angry. Very good writing. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Best wishes. Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2011 4:23:00 AM

Congratulations Francine, for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2011 10:29:00 PM

You did great, Francine! Congratulations in the haiku contest. LUv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/24/2011 8:12:00 PM

Many congratulations for this top win.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/24/2011 2:47:00 PM

yes it does seem that way especially when a child! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/24/2011 10:34:00 AM

well deserved win the contest, francine... KUDOS to you for the special win!! :) huggs, nette

John Freeman

Date: 1/24/2011 9:56:00 AM

Way to go Francine on your worthy poem presentation in 7th place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 9:22:00 AM

You certainly did give personification to the storm clouds, Francine. Very nice!! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/24/2011 8:59:00 AM

Hi Francine - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/24/2011 8:27:00 AM

Indeed those angry voices can shake the roof!! Well done, Francine! Congratulations on your win! ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/24/2011 6:47:00 AM

Congrats Francine on your super win in the haiku vs. senryu contest .. awesome win luv..

James Tate

Date: 1/20/2011 2:21:00 PM

Great haiku, Francine. You've handled this type very well, and it is not easily done. Thanks for your comments on mine.

James Fraser

Date: 1/18/2011 12:42:00 PM

I enjoy thunder and lightning Francine. To witness the power natures has is awesome. Good luck in the contest....:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/18/2011 5:19:00 AM

Wishing you the best in the contest Francine. Enjoyed reading this outstanding piece this morning. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/17/2011 10:57:00 PM

It sure does, an excellent haiku, good luck in te contest. thank you for my placement in your contest Francine. Harry

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/17/2011 8:12:00 PM

Do you know anyone who enjoys thunder and lightning? Your haiku renders a good description of electrical discharges during a storm.