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Thunder Roars

thunder roars

from storm clouds overhead

  angry voices





for Charles Henderson's Haiku vs Senryu contest

Copyright © Francine Roberts | Year Posted 2011

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January 26, 2011 at 8:06 PM

It sounds like that sometimes, doesn't it? As though the sky is angry. Very good writing. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Best wishes. Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 25, 2011 at 4:23 AM

Congratulations Francine, for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

January 24, 2011 at 10:29 PM

You did great, Francine! Congratulations in the haiku contest. LUv, Andrea

January 24, 2011 at 8:12 PM

Many congratulations for this top win.

January 24, 2011 at 2:47 PM

yes it does seem that way especially when a child! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

January 24, 2011 at 10:34 AM

well deserved win the contest, francine... KUDOS to you for the special win!! :) huggs, nette

January 24, 2011 at 9:56 AM

Way to go Francine on your worthy poem presentation in 7th place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

January 24, 2011 at 9:22 AM

You certainly did give personification to the storm clouds, Francine. Very nice!! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn

January 24, 2011 at 8:59 AM

Hi Francine - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

Carrie Richards

January 24, 2011 at 8:27 AM

Indeed those angry voices can shake the roof!! Well done, Francine! Congratulations on your win! ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 24, 2011 at 6:47 AM

Congrats Francine on your super win in the haiku vs. senryu contest .. awesome win luv..

January 20, 2011 at 2:21 PM

Great haiku, Francine. You've handled this type very well, and it is not easily done. Thanks for your comments on mine.

January 18, 2011 at 12:42 PM

I enjoy thunder and lightning Francine. To witness the power natures has is awesome. Good luck in the contest....:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 18, 2011 at 5:19 AM

Wishing you the best in the contest Francine. Enjoyed reading this outstanding piece this morning. Love, Carol

January 17, 2011 at 10:57 PM

It sure does, an excellent haiku, good luck in te contest. thank you for my placement in your contest Francine. Harry

January 17, 2011 at 8:12 PM

Do you know anyone who enjoys thunder and lightning? Your haiku renders a good description of electrical discharges during a storm.

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