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Thunder Queen

The storm that is you thunders slow and brilliant in my heart, spliting my beliefs into bliss and blunders tossing the limbs of my love from finished to start, The hail sows no hate temperatures taste extreme, your fast weather pummels my pride's fate the howl and moan stiffens my body's fleshy slate with a new font spelling lust in capital sweat and gleam as the conceit in me enjoys the torrent of your sorrow's date, You hump me with a dying wish placing me inside you, gently, romantically, undeniably selfish, I fall in love with you again for the umpteenth time and your face never grows old shows no cold disappears not in tragedy's confine, overlapping my overview of life, hot and hellish the art that is you pounces into view, the rumble I relish, Wanting me to know what you deserve breathing into me the smoke of your burning love, I become love wrecked, quaking from the sting you serve preserving everything your spirit spits and sings from above - J.A.B.

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Simon King

Date: 3/14/2020 6:05:00 AM

Powerful, truthful and heartfelt, Nice one .

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/14/2020 6:43:00 PM

Thank you Poet...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein

Date: 12/19/2015 7:07:00 PM

U r so damn talented poet , u know how to write a pure beautiful sensational love poem , you can capture every body's soul with every single word you write...Every time you impress me with a new unforgettable and magnificent, deep poem can't expect what's next ..I just want you to know that you've inspired me and I'm only one from a thousands of people who read ur poems, keep up the remarkable , spectacular write cause ur the poet of this time...hugs / / :) dalia

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/21/2015 6:36:00 PM

Dalia, when I first read, and felt your powerful comment it was like being kissed by star fire. Poetry is my life, and allows me to express my heart and soul like a new star in the heavens, as well as a man believing in a divine purpose for the world. I truly believe that the greatest accomplishment for an Artist is to inspire how he or she has been inspired themselves Dalia...J.A.B.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/26/2014 4:24:00 PM

Sensual and powerful work here! Thank you for your kind words! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/27/2014 7:55:00 PM

Thank you Matthew. This poem magnifies how love for another person can impact our beliefs in the most amazing and turbulent ways. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/4/2014 2:36:00 AM

Waiting for a new write, I have the joy of reading some of the older ones again. Powerful poem...beautiful!

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/4/2014 8:16:00 PM

I will have something savory for you soon Eileen...in the meantime keep my words warm. J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 6/27/2014 8:35:00 PM

Love is the storms of life. Justin, beautifully written... Verlena

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/28/2014 2:56:00 PM

Love is a roving hurricane in my soul, and I chase it with revelry Verlena. Love is a discovery of meaning, of heart beat purpose. J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/24/2014 2:50:00 PM

This beautiful poem describes the woman of your life like the storm..and We all know how powerful this storm.is and how it sweeps all away.I love the way you described the tremendous strength of passion and love,and the way you expressed such intense emotions-Awesome!!!

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/24/2014 3:49:00 PM

This love storm doesn't sweep away or ruin, rather, it is a Divine partnership in spiritual renewal in many respects. She and I are the maximum of the five Elements of Nature's vitality Charma. Love, passion and wisdom are the gifts of our unexpiring connection. Thank you for sharing in our blessing my friend. J.A.B.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/23/2014 8:48:00 PM

Dear Justin, an amazing poem of love that withstands life's storms. I especially enjoyed the lines: "I fall in love with you again for the umpteenth time and your face never grows old shows no cold." This is a sign of everlasting love. Very passionate! Excellent write! Love, Carolyn

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/24/2014 3:57:00 PM

Your love and rich experience are very well received Carolyn. A good relationship does compell partners to rediscover from time to time the meaning of their values, beautiful struggles, and to see the pure love in the lights of our eyes, to embrace love's thunder. Thanks you Carolyn. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/21/2014 4:17:00 AM

:) passionate write.. :) i specially like 2nd stanza, it's a hot interlude for the succeeding one, opposite it may seem the 3rd but it still brings hotness in different view.. :)

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/21/2014 8:23:00 PM

Its a hot storm no doubt Olive, I guess I just have a hot heart : D my favorite is the last verse. I'm always stimulated by how you break down my poems, thanks! J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2014 3:25:00 PM

hahha, just reading THIS reply you had made to me as well!!! What you said about love!! BTW, in my midnight poem, the blackness is my black cat Razmatazz. I was too obscure. Only black cat lovers are getting it!!

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/18/2014 8:31:00 PM

Yeah, no doubt woman, you know it! Hey babe, don't discount the interpretations readers make on your Art, life, art, love its all free to be perceived the way it needs to be for each of us. I wasn't pretending to know your heart, I just told ehat your neat write elicited from within me, LOL...I had a beautiful black cat named Congo a few years ago. R.I.P., he thought he was a monkey. J.A.B.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 6/15/2014 12:57:00 PM

Great tribute Justin --- loved the well penned rhymes and rhythms brother! Awesome imagery (lol!) All hail the Thunder Queen! ~~Keith~~

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/15/2014 8:27:00 PM

A love that either destroys a heart with it's intensity or reconstructs a heart to support a greater awareness of life's meaning Keith. I wouldn't want my woman and muse to be anything less than a beautiful storm. Happy you felt the storm rhythem Brother Keith. J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 10:39:00 AM

A nice way, in trying to be or pick up after the storm. Bruising those who can & might care. A tragedy confinement, no one should bare, hitting every rock there ever is, ever was. Only hail, can demonstrate the power of God... A mentality no one will ever encounter twice.... Enjoyed~ Linda

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/8/2014 1:45:00 PM

Wow Linda, I deeply appreciate your poetic and soulful response, it could make a fine write of wisdom in itself! God's hail has no hate, and Love's storm gives life form. This affection and friendship is not motivated by hurt, rather the bond is built on brave awareness of what we be. This poem is inked with true excitement and respect for both souls. I love my Thunder Queen. Thanks for awesome comment my Sphinx. J.A.B.

Malkavian Raven

Date: 6/6/2014 9:35:00 PM

Kindred spirits we may be. Giving the quartet, you were generous enough to read through, I am able to identify with this. Flowing smoothly, start to finish. Sensual, seductive and beautifully written. Kudos. - Raven

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/7/2014 6:39:00 PM

Kindred spirits in discovering, and expressing the lessons of Love. More so than lessons, I seek to to create love, the teachings follow the waves to soul's shore. Thank you for respecting the rhyme, and the storm. J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/5/2014 9:20:00 PM

Justin, again, at a loss for words. Your poem was fascinating from beginning to end. Loved this intensely passionate verse...what am i saying.. : ) I have no words... XD Just, amazing job! Always, Laura

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/8/2014 2:22:00 AM

Awhh, thanks! That's very sweet of you. : )

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/7/2014 6:43:00 PM

Music is such a very important part of my life Laura, and I'm always thrilled to find new artist to be inspired by. Your recommendation rocks. You have super cool tastes. J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/6/2014 8:08:00 PM

Sweet! I'm glad you liked the Otep song. It's one of my favorites of hers. Her words are raw, dark and wild, just the way I like! ~Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/6/2014 2:24:00 PM

I am a storm lover Laura. This passion fills the aquifer of my heart. Thank you for the honor Poetess! Hey, that Odept song you mentioned is so primal and beautiful, thanks! J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/5/2014 9:22:00 PM

(I'll be coming back for this one! ) -fav for sure~Laura

A.E. Rivenbark

Date: 6/4/2014 2:27:00 AM

Sensual and passionate, Thor could not tame her. :D

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/4/2014 8:18:00 PM

A romantic interpretation Riverbank, however, the goal is not to tame, rather it is to invite Love's rain in full force. Don't underestimate Thor's impact on her heart. He has his victory, for he has gained as much as he has given. Thanks for feeling the tempest in this love storm, looking forward to reading more of you. J.A.B.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/3/2014 1:12:00 AM

You personified the unpredictability, the passion, and the whirlwind that is love. Sometimes we just get caught up in it like debris on the stormy winds.... This is a very beautiful and powerful write, Justin!

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/3/2014 3:53:00 PM

Yes Kelly, love's weather can whip us up like debris in it's tornado of reckless affection. I love the wise voice of your heart. Sometimes its better to dance in the storm rather than sit in safety my friend. J.A.B.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2014 8:08:00 AM

Passionate work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/1/2014 2:07:00 PM

Passionate work for a passionate life Sara. The pleasure is all mine my friend. J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2014 11:54:00 PM

wow, she sounds like a real tempest!! In a great way though. Very cool metaphors!

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/1/2014 1:50:00 PM

Love is a God damned storm Andrea, and its the greatest thing I know! J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/31/2014 10:23:00 PM

Sensually seductive..... poetically powerful. Great write

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/1/2014 1:57:00 PM

I never met a storm that wasn't sensuous and seductive, they move, unfold without permission, with determined purpose Eileen. Thank you for feeling this storm. J.A.B.