Thump

Thump, thump...thump Hear that? Of course you can...it's for your ears It's the sounds of love juices flowing through my veins Through my heart, through my soul Exiting...for you And... Thump, thump...thump For all...everyone My fellow... Beings Thump, thump... Thump Thump, thump... Thump Thump, thump... Dear Heart Poetry Contest Sponsor Silent One 1/15/2020

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/19/2020 6:36:00 PM

Hello Charles … the sounds of love are often felt and usually from the heart - thanks Charles - Lindsay

Constance La France

Date: 1/19/2020 8:20:00 AM

Charlie, wonderful write and so creative! Congratulations on your win in the contest _Constance

Silent One

Date: 1/19/2020 7:45:00 AM

hahah clever idea.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/18/2020 8:11:00 AM

A lovely poem and a beautiful message to all of us. Thump, Thump, Thump. Best wishes for the contest my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/16/2020 1:21:00 PM

Hello Charles Messina, thump,thump. yes that sounds like love. Have a nice day my friend.

Winged Warrior

Date: 1/16/2020 12:18:00 PM

You sure it's not the jack-hammer from the construction crew outside lol...like your thump better though...all the best Charlie for the New Year...^WW^ :o)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/16/2020 6:59:00 AM

Echoes of heart for humanity--noble gesture, Charlie. Thump for you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/15/2020 9:34:00 PM

Love that thump, thump, thump, Charlie. So endearing, how you expressed it. Cheers, Gershon

Charles Messina
Date: 1/15/2020 9:57:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. There's a thump in there for you brother :)