Thrown Out of a Burning Plane

Iowa or Nebraska? Kansas or?
I get tossed out before I get any answers.
Wow! This is the best idea I ever had.
I float like a cloud,
Can I flip onto my back?
Who would want to? This is heaven!

I float casually for quite a while,
Enjoying the scenery 
This is better than being in the airplane.
I am actually part of this! I am a giant bird, 
I am on top of the world.
Feelings I cannot describe have taken me over.
I am captive to feelings that have no name.
I float happily

Until I realize I am getting closer to earth now.
Panic rises to the top of the feelings pile.
What if I land on a big tree?
How deep is that water? Is it a lake or a pond?
Who will find me? Sky diving was crazy. Dangerous!
I hear the plane crash. Feel relief that I am safe.  Did the pilot get out? He was a great guy.
Am I going to land in that tree?  Who would find me there?  Where is the steering wheel?

That is the last thing I remember 
Then WHOMP! I was on the ground, landing insanely close to a lake.
A fisherman on the other side waved. 
I waved back.
Normal? Probably never again actually.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 8/4/2019 1:24:00 AM
The floating in the clouds part is awesome, but it's the getting closer to earth bit that worries me - fun poem and very thought provoking imagery! Love and blessings Caren, Jennifer.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/4/2019 8:01:00 AM
It was a writing prompt and I actually had a blast writing it!
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