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Through Your Eyes

Through your eyes as a manifest grey-blue sky my pic depicts each time I gaze For I'm ugly but through your eyes I'm a bright-blue morning sky I'm bondage by your love as I can not leave a wee without think of you my love as we entwined our fingers hearts doors opened with glee. Through your eyes that shine as soft sunshine I fell into a trance.................................I saw my zion..........................oh my love, my divine love,................................. only you I adore, you are my angel.....................................my eternity. www.thefreedictionary.com/Zion

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James Fraser

Date: 12/8/2015 2:34:00 PM

Beautifully loving poetry and a delight to read ~~ James ~~

Feli Elizab

Date: 11/13/2015 6:58:00 PM

What a romantic poem, Afolabi. And the structure of this just adds to the buildup at the end. Very nice!

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 11/7/2015 4:07:00 AM

Afolabi.. a wonderful and fun depiction of love and affection.. i loved it

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/7/2015 4:04:00 AM

Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2015 12:17:00 AM

such a sweet and loving write, enjoyed:) pd

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 10/5/2015 4:18:00 PM

Very romantic from the shape to the words. I enjoyed:-)

Michael Tor

Date: 10/4/2015 9:03:00 PM

Passion to the max Afolabi. Excellent love entry..

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/4/2015 2:24:00 AM

There is a zion built upon the mount of Love, stone of stars mortared with the masonry of angel's magic, where the touch of two hearbeats completes the horizon of Destiny...this is a poem of divine devotion, you are nestled within the nourishing wings of love, held by eyes that glow from your beauty. This poem means so much to me Afolabi, it is an affirmation of love's open eyes, so romantic, soulful, and immortal! I needed this poetry tonight, I needed to feel the eyelashes of love...J.A.B.

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/4/2015 2:27:00 AM