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Through Your Eyes

Through your eyes as a manifest grey-blue 
sky  my  pic  depicts  each  time  I gaze
For I'm ugly but through your  eyes
I'm a bright-blue morning sky
I'm bondage by your love
as I can not leave
a wee without
think of you
my love
as
we
entwined
our fingers
hearts doors opened
with glee. Through your eyes
that     shine    as  soft   sunshine
I fell into a trance.................................I
saw  my  zion..........................oh my love, my 
divine love,................................. only you I adore,
you are  my angel.....................................my eternity.





www.thefreedictionary.com/Zion

Copyright © Afolabi Muideen | Year Posted 2015

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James Fraser Date: 12/8/2015 2:34:00 PM Beautifully loving poetry and a delight to read ~~ James ~~ Login to Reply

Feli Elizab Date: 11/13/2015 6:58:00 PM What a romantic poem, Afolabi. And the structure of this just adds to the buildup at the end. Very nice! Login to Reply

Lewis Nyaga Date: 11/7/2015 4:07:00 AM Afolabi.. a wonderful and fun depiction of love and affection.. i loved it Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/7/2015 4:04:00 AM Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/7/2015 12:17:00 AM such a sweet and loving write, enjoyed:) pd Login to Reply

Njeri Hunjeri Date: 10/5/2015 4:18:00 PM Very romantic from the shape to the words. I enjoyed:-) Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 10/4/2015 9:03:00 PM Passion to the max Afolabi. Excellent love entry.. Login to Reply

Justin Bordner Date: 10/4/2015 2:24:00 AM There is a zion built upon the mount of Love, stone of stars mortared with the masonry of angel's magic, where the touch of two hearbeats completes the horizon of Destiny...this is a poem of divine devotion, you are nestled within the nourishing wings of love, held by eyes that glow from your beauty. This poem means so much to me Afolabi, it is an affirmation of love's open eyes, so romantic, soulful, and immortal! I needed this poetry tonight, I needed to feel the eyelashes of love...J.A.B. Login to Reply Justin Bordner Date: 10/4/2015 2:27:00 AM This poem is crafted very beautifully with ingenuity and genuine passion. The way you include the word zion is so meaningful. A FAV! J.A.B.

Arthur Vaso Date: 10/3/2015 11:26:00 PM Anyone who writes with this passion, is beautiful in the eyes of all! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/3/2015 3:02:00 PM quite a passionate write well done, afolabi.. huggs Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 10/3/2015 1:24:00 PM Very heartfelt and romantic, Afolabi. I enjoyed your very creative Etheree. Sandra Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/3/2015 10:07:00 AM I get the feeling of this one being on a spiritual level..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 10/2/2015 11:11:00 PM Wow nice fine shape poetry patterned creatively. A lovely love poem written swell. Thumbs up.. Pls don't forget to review my latest poem too. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 10/2/2015 10:27:00 PM Love this romantic write. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/2/2015 5:32:00 PM beautifully romantic! try the contest on lessons learnt. I bet you can do an amazing one for that as well! Login to Reply Afolabi Muideen Date: 10/2/2015 6:49:00 PM For the contest hope I will give it a try. Afolabi Muideen Date: 10/2/2015 6:48:00 PM Thank you very much for your kind words It's much appreciated. or that contest, hope I will give it a try. Thank you.

Tim Smith Date: 10/2/2015 1:29:00 PM Very beautiful Login to Reply Afolabi Muideen Date: 10/2/2015 6:12:00 PM Thank you for dropped by to read and comment to my page.