Afolabi Muideen Poet Etheree

Through Your Eyes

Through your eyes as a manifest grey-blue 
sky  my  pic  depicts  each  time  I gaze
For I'm ugly but through your  eyes
I'm a bright-blue morning sky
I'm bondage by your love
as I can not leave
a wee without
think of you
my love
as
we
entwined
our fingers
hearts doors opened
with glee. Through your eyes
that     shine    as  soft   sunshine
I fell into a trance.................................I
saw  my  zion..........................oh my love, my 
divine love,................................. only you I adore,
you are  my angel.....................................my eternity.





www.thefreedictionary.com/Zion

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James Fraser December 8, 2015 at 2:34 PM Beautifully loving poetry and a delight to read ~~ James ~~

Feli Elizab November 13, 2015 at 6:58 PM What a romantic poem, Afolabi. And the structure of this just adds to the buildup at the end. Very nice!

Lewis Nyaga November 7, 2015 at 4:07 AM Afolabi.. a wonderful and fun depiction of love and affection.. i loved it

Ravi Sathasivam October 7, 2015 at 4:04 AM Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Poet Destroyer A October 7, 2015 at 12:17 AM such a sweet and loving write, enjoyed:) pd

Njeri Hunjeri October 5, 2015 at 4:18 PM Very romantic from the shape to the words. I enjoyed:-)

Michael Tor October 4, 2015 at 9:03 PM Passion to the max Afolabi. Excellent love entry..

Justin Bordner October 4, 2015 at 2:24 AM There is a zion built upon the mount of Love, stone of stars mortared with the masonry of angel's magic, where the touch of two hearbeats completes the horizon of Destiny...this is a poem of divine devotion, you are nestled within the nourishing wings of love, held by eyes that glow from your beauty. This poem means so much to me Afolabi, it is an affirmation of love's open eyes, so romantic, soulful, and immortal! I needed this poetry tonight, I needed to feel the eyelashes of love...J.A.B. Justin Bordner October 4, 2015 at 2:27 AM This poem is crafted very beautifully with ingenuity and genuine passion. The way you include the word zion is so meaningful. A FAV! J.A.B.

Arthur Vaso October 3, 2015 at 11:26 PM Anyone who writes with this passion, is beautiful in the eyes of all!

Nette Onclaud October 3, 2015 at 3:02 PM quite a passionate write well done, afolabi.. huggs

Sandra Haight October 3, 2015 at 1:24 PM Very heartfelt and romantic, Afolabi. I enjoyed your very creative Etheree. Sandra

Sara Kendrick October 3, 2015 at 10:07 AM I get the feeling of this one being on a spiritual level..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri October 2, 2015 at 11:11 PM Wow nice fine shape poetry patterned creatively. A lovely love poem written swell. Thumbs up.. Pls don't forget to review my latest poem too.

Eve Roper October 2, 2015 at 10:27 PM Love this romantic write.

Andrea Dietrich October 2, 2015 at 5:32 PM beautifully romantic! try the contest on lessons learnt. I bet you can do an amazing one for that as well! Afolabi Muideen October 2, 2015 at 6:49 PM For the contest hope I will give it a try. Afolabi Muideen October 2, 2015 at 6:48 PM Thank you very much for your kind words It's much appreciated. or that contest, hope I will give it a try. Thank you.

Tim Smith October 2, 2015 at 1:29 PM Very beautiful Afolabi Muideen October 2, 2015 at 6:12 PM Thank you for dropped by to read and comment to my page.