Through the Steamed Up Glass

Arriving home from work
Sleepy and tired
Hot shower i craved
A quiet evening desired

To the bathroom i go
Cascades of water sounds
Through the steamed up glass
A curvaceous figure is found

Her shoulder length hair
Soaked back in hold
Her body pressed to the pane
A sight to behold

As i watch her shower
Admiring her lathered hands
Caressing as she cleans
In solitary command

Her undulations 
Wetted glow
In adventurous display
Her body shows

I catch her eye
Through the steamed up glass
My girlfriend, my love
My Highland lass

Door ajar
She invites me in
Naked like birth
Skin to skin

Our hands in wander
As the water flows
We merge into one
In loving glow




http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-7.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/29/2010 10:04:00 AM
Passionate and with Class...Such a relaxing evening indeed..Charma
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2010 10:38:00 PM
I really liked this James. It took me by surprise after reading so much of your material. Your love and passion for this woman so shine through in this poem. How lovely. And how lucky a woman she is. I have been busy lately and not many visits. Glad I was able to catch this one. I will send you soup mail to answer you ? on my page. Thanks for your time and warm comments that were so deeply appreciated. Have a great day!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2010 7:54:00 PM
Don't tell me you are going to start writing erotica (lol) must be a trend..oh dear... .. I like your other poetry much better... dear sir.. but this is sort of romantic.. and it is not too sexually explicit. acceptable ...please don't go all wierd on me... smiling here in Canada.. makes my poems look little kid stuff... gosh darn
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2010 7:27:00 PM
Sooo romantic, James! And as Deborah says, very tastefully presented in your own unique Highlander style. Now let me offer you a terrycloth kilt to help you dry off. Smile. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2010 5:43:00 PM
What a beautiful poem, James! Delightful and romantic. Love between two people in love and happy!! God bless you guys! And thank you for reading and leaving comments on my poems! Peace, Audrey
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2010 5:02:00 PM
OH MY GOSH! I love this piece! So purely romantic and aaaahhhh so beautiful! But it also makes me realize just how much alone I really am! I cried reading this, because you are so lucky to have that beautiful passion, something I have missed for more than 4 years! Thank you so much for sharing this! It is very beautiful! You are an extraordinary talented man!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2010 2:13:00 PM
Nice ending to a tiring day. Very refreshing also. Very passionate write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2010 2:13:00 PM
Very nice..tastefull ;) I don't think you need the last 2 verses..it's more powerfull without. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad