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Decades ago, we met one afternoon the talk was of change that was coming soon. Betty Jean's dad gave his insightful view that the elite life may not continue - in his gracious estate on Cheswold Lane across from the Cricket Club's courts of fame. Peering out of his big picture window and wondering which way the winds would blow. Trying to fit in, find ways to belong breathing in deeply, singing life's sweet song. Who were we? Who did we dare think we were? Chasing into life in a blazing blur. Part of the "in-crowd", on top of the heap, privileges afforded, no fear to leap. Cliques became a fated cloistered class we never thought that this could come to pass. Nothing could catch us, or so we all thought, futures so firm, the best that could be bought. Main Line culture fell into slow decline in a way the blue bloods could not define. Wealthy old families lost their tight hold the nouveau riche then surged forward bold. This happens looking through the picture glass dependent on birthright coupled with class. Who'd thought bucolic beauty so brittle? Certainly not us, we knew so little. Couplet 26 lines 196 words Color Pencil illustration by G. Gaul Reference to the area of Main Line Philadelphia's Merion Cricket Club

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Date: 8/20/2024 5:45:00 AM
Brilliant Greg; both your rhyming and subject matter. Your illustration is superb too. I just had to Google the cricket club: I never associate USA with cricket..“ The historic sport of cricket has been a part of Lower Merion since it was first played at Haverford College in 1834. In 1865, fifteen young Main Line enthusiasts first played cricket on the grounds of Colonel Owen Jones’ estate in Wynnewood; next on new club property acquired on Cricket Avenue in Ardmore.” Cheers - Gary
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Greg Gaul
Date: 8/21/2024 6:01:00 AM
Gary, thanks for your visit and going so deep. It's so validating to have a poet friend of your stature like you. Keep writing. Be well.

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