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Through the Mist

through the mist vision blurred by the bias of our views with no attempt to walk in another men's shoes blinded by the fog we draw chalky lines for others to cross in the rising haze of heat our voices yell through the murky air nowhere a clear rationale to hear or see through this toxic stew this becomes our reality when ideas supersede our fellow beings through the blur i see no love just hate covered and guised as ideas if only they could see through the mist, that is us on both sides of the street Maurice Yvonne Through The Mist Contest August 24 2014

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Date: 8/25/2014 9:48:00 AM
It's a very creative write and good luck in the contest, Maurice
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Date: 8/24/2014 8:56:00 PM
full of wisdom, Maurice! this is a treasure!
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Date: 8/24/2014 6:21:00 PM
wonderful take on the theme Maurice i too also love the final line:-) Good luck with the contest Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/24/2014 6:00:00 PM
Wow! Great piece, the last line in just terrific. BG
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Date: 8/24/2014 4:18:00 PM
Hope you won the contest friend. An excellent piece of writing. thank you for commenting on my quote best wishes Pete.
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