Through the Mist

Through the Mist
It feels like a lifetime has passed since my beloved I last saw, Bedecked in shining armor, my brave Geoffrey did gallantly gallop, Riding his silver steed, through a soft silky blue morning mist That like a tender lover enveloped and amorously embraced him.
Now overtaken by dark despair, silently willing my love to reappear, Despondently I peer through this most mystifying mist, realizing that On this fateful day twenty years before, he had unwittingly succumbed To its seductive allure because man and mist had merged becoming one.
08-21-2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Acquah Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 4:02 AM
I understand This... beautifully poetic.
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October 21, 2014 at 6:43 AM
Thank you so much, dear Vicki. It is really good to hear from you and you are so kind to compliment my work! I greatly appreciate your support and encouragement. Pandita
Mcdaid Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 9:40 AM
powerful pen pandita very beautiful drawn piece
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October 14, 2014 at 8:53 PM
you also have a beautiful day oh i am steady transporting myself smiling
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October 14, 2014 at 8:44 PM
Liam, thank you so much for your compliments. This one is special for me because I enjoyed transporting myself to another time and place. Have a great day! Pandita
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August 31, 2014 at 1:50 AM
Excellence Pandita.... Mystically penned... Super-awesome as well. Verlena
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August 31, 2014 at 3:27 AM
Thank you so much dear Verlena. I can't tell you how much your compliments mean to me! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 8:01 PM
Pandita, I love this mystifying story! Wonderfully penned! Kika
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August 29, 2014 at 8:56 PM
Thank you dear Kika for your kind compliments which I appreciate! Pandita
Carroll Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 9:48 AM
A lovely romantic write! Thanks for your visit to my page..
Sietesantos Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 10:26 AM
Thank you so much, Ken for your wonderful compliments which I truly appreciate! Pandita
Ragavan Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 12:35 AM
I like the way you used imagery to project your feelings and yes, it does succeed. The title of the poem is succinct too. Congratulations!
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August 24, 2014 at 8:24 AM
Hi Venkat, thank you so very much for taking the time to read my work. I appreciate your great comments and compliments! Warm regards. Pandita
Yvonne Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 12:32 AM
excellent. thank you this was a muched enjoyed read.
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August 24, 2014 at 12:35 AM
Hi Maurice, I am very happy that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you very much for visiting! Warm regards. Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 1:44 AM
wow, such a mystical one! ghostly!
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August 22, 2014 at 6:41 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Well, I guess the "mist" pulled me in too - lol!
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