Through the Mist

Through the mist meandering
The years forgotten come
Like a lonely river wondering
Into a bay frozen and numb

In the winter's chilly blowing
In the bright and frigid sun
In the hearts unended longing
We are not cured or done

But the thought is not apprehended
Until you remember me
And our vows again are blended 
Into love's felicity.

By the quiet morning marble gleaming
Where seasons go and come again
My hope on its silence leaning
Carry the panacea of pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/15/2009 6:35:00 PM
Sad but poignant words from your pen L'nass and intricate weaving of words... like it... last two line are powerhouse ones... thankxxx for your many kind comments on my poetry also and for taking time to read ... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/15/2009 11:13:00 AM
Beautiful but sad write, L'nass. I especially like the last two lines,"..My hope on its silence leaning Carry the antidote of pain." superb imagery! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey P.S. Thank you so much for taking your time to read and comment kindly on my poems, L'nass. I truly appreciate it! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/15/2009 8:48:00 AM
A melancholy, somber, yet lovely poem. You have captured a winter morning, and the memories of passing time. Another beauty. ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/15/2009 7:09:00 AM
There is expressiveness and descriptiveness in this one with a good flow. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara Soup Mail
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