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Through the Glass

Roosters crow at the break of day
Inviting the sun to come up
And reveal a partly cloudy sky
While the poet shivers as she stays
Out on the porch to view up high
The odd slow movement of clouds cupped
Like a clam shell's ridges flay

White crackled cold dew coats summer grass
Pines softly sigh their winter song
Amidst bamboo wind chime's mellow tunes
Winter's bite removes desire to surpass  
Time out on the porch with nature commune 
Birdsong symphony; poet belongs
Not viewing nature through the glass

The Star Magnolia now blossoms white stars
Daffodils delicate leaves show
Forcefully pushed through frozen clay
Encouraged by the signs of spring's stars
The poet's winter blues allay
As warm sun shines returns aglow
Luscious plants become new avatars

Soon the red earth will warm again
Remove the damp damaging frost
Bare limbs whipped by winter winds
Will invite to come unconstrained
Now the northwesterly breeze blinds
The pines sigh from the cold winds tossed
A poet languishes behind glass constrained

Written: February 06, 2016
Inspired by a contest..It was a challenge..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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George   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:10 AM
Wow! Sara You did a wonderful job with this very difficult form. WELL DONE!!! Elaine
Jones Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 9:49 PM
A beautiful lifting read Sara ...just lovely....hope all is well
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Amazing beauty in this lovely winning poem Sara. Congratulations! ; )
A. Sharma Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 2:01 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Sara.
Gentry Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 8:11 PM
Congratulations Sara on this awesome win! Your descriptive poetry is awesome!
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Live images invites my senses to wake. Congrats.
Adams Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 10:26 AM
lovely write Sara, congrats on your win~
A   Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Sara, congrats on your lovely win. LINDA
Johnson Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 11:09 PM
very pretty Sara. Thank you for my high rating for "The One Who Survives. There were seven of us. I had 5 brothers and a sister. I was a middle child. I have no one now who shares he memories of those early years. Thank God I have my daughters and grandchildren, having lost my son and two husbands. I truly am a survivor. That is what happens. You face much the same. Love, Joyce
Anish Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 6:29 PM
Fine portrait of the natural world and the poet's place in it! Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Richards Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Wow, this is just beautiful, Sara! I can see it all !! and ps......I must thank you so much for my placement in your last contest. You have some terrific entries.....so this is an honor! Thanks again!
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 3:53 PM
sara. I don't know what the challenge was, but you were very splendidly inspired with THIS gem!
Maverick Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Great conveyance of thought; and desire stark months, and coming spring Sara..'
A   Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 10:01 AM
You have a beautiful landscape to write about. The language in every line is well worth reading again. I read this post twice ... hugs
Horsman Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 4:09 PM
You write of inspiration by a contest, and that is exactly how i feel, inspired reading this wonderful poetry.
Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 5:42 PM
I am glad that you were inspired by the work..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent here..Sara
Bocsa Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Delicate poem I have just enjoyed:The Star Magnolia now blossoms white stars Daffodils delicate leaves show
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 6:49 AM
- Snowdrops and crocus ....and many more - spring finest flowers, Sara - A beautiful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Such amazing imagery Sara - we have the spring flowers starting to bring colour into our world:-) hugs Jan xx 7
Kendrick Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 5:16 PM
Yes, spring is on the way but it seems like it will be such a very long time..Thanks for the visit ..I appreciate you dropping by..Sara
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