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Through the Fog

one eye open, Light flickers through some die smokin, boots, whickers, booze drawls and the draw, one liners move sunsets on set, squirt bottles make dew tossing and a turn around, naps till noon suns rising high, pink sky, red lips bloom she made love with someone, i never knew he left, I cuddled her, just two in the room text alert, nothing hurt, a bit of bad news my love from across the states, my true boo long nights, and sweating shadows, only few knives cutting deep, as I sleep, are nothing new I rhymed in my dreams, have had a lot to chew murderers and lovers, both happiness and doom running away, driving fast, whistling a tune falling down, making sounds, morning light soon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/19/2012 3:29:00 AM
Whoa! Sounds like a roller coaster! I love it! Nicely done Davin!
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Davin Payne
Date: 10/19/2012 5:25:00 PM
Thanks very much. I was inspired by the dreams I have been having lately..and a horseback ride.: )

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