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"people have so much pain inside them that they're

not even aware of  . .  . "

Quote by - Marina Abramovic

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We know that the eyes are the window to the soul, do we fear others seeing the pain that we hold; are we so afraid that our spirit will be stole? Through staring eyes let your innermost thoughts unfold. Do we fear others seeing the pain that we hold? Marina teaches us how to go way beyond, through staring eyes- let your innermost thoughts unfold; oh, can we open up and emotionally bond. Marina teaches us how to go way beyond, she had said goodbye to her lover years ago; oh, can we open up and emotionally bond? Yes, as he sat across from her the tears did flow. She had said goodbye to her lover years ago, no words were said as their eyes filled up with the pain; yes, as he sat across from her the tears did flow, each emotion we feel in this life leaves a stain. No words were said- as their eyes filled up with the pain. Are we so afraid that our spirit will be stole? Each emotion we feel in this life- leaves a stain. We know . . . the eyes are the window to the soul. ______________________________ January 7, 2019 Poetry/Pantoum/Through Staring Eyes Copyright Protected, ID 19-1101-857-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Marina Abramovic sponsor, Line Gauthier Fifth Place

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Date: 1/28/2019 9:55:00 PM
Yay! You obviously did some research, too! Wow! And I love the form -- the repeating lines consolidate the message so that it packs a punch! I NEVER don't love your poems! Thank You!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/29/2019 7:03:00 AM
Andrew, thanks for visiting, oh yes some research was required for this poem, I like the Pantoum form and thanks for the compliment ~
Date: 1/28/2019 6:24:00 PM
Congratulations my friend this was awesome!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/29/2019 7:03:00 AM
Bobby, thanks for the congrats and the awesome ~
Date: 1/28/2019 4:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Constance. A very powerful piece.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/29/2019 7:04:00 AM
Line, thanks for the contest and the inspiration to write this poem ~
Date: 1/8/2019 6:35:00 AM
Another, "Fav" on my list.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/8/2019 8:55:00 PM
ML, thanks so much for the fav ~

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