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Oh, Lord, imbue me with gratitude and zeal. Much as the red burst trailed the glistening steel. As a possible sequel, yielding divinely may reveal. There is no laziness but an apparent ordeal. What if I could eagerly grasp the spirits for adoring? Allow me to depict life out of a stance of meaning. Sustain me to detain a brilliant guide for the amnesty. And to their ecstatic vision and quenchless docility. Will the seeds of cognitive empathy sprout in my mind? Provide me with the heroic virtue of sensitivity, divined. Sustain me in my prompt walk with God, the all-powerful. I worship in the tiny shoes of the burdened flowerful. Do I need to trust my intensity? And gain pride Some suffer the ill insight of an internal guide. May the Lord's goodness utterly define my life today? A true impetus for massively amending wildly way. I dearly need to be encouraged for forgiveness. Ostensively allow me to be infused with faithfulness. I need being for others a wellspring of graciousness. God, support me to succeed and ensure progress.
1St Place Contest Winner Written: December 04, 2021 BEATITUDE RHYMING POEM Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

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Date: 12/28/2021 10:24:00 PM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this "be-attitude of the heart." God bless you. A blessed New Year to your and your family.
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Date: 12/11/2021 2:34:00 PM
Lasaad, congratulations on your First Place win in my "Z" Contest. I loved your choice of words and phrases, great writing ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
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Date: 12/11/2021 4:31:00 PM
Dear Constance, thank you so much for reading, commenting, and placing my poem, it means a lot to me, and it's appreciated.
Date: 12/9/2021 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Lasaad! "I worship in the tiny shoes of the burdened," "quenchless docility," "brilliant guide for amnesty" - just three of your dynamic phrases and ultra-creative rhymes. Well done my friend. Blessings!
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Date: 12/8/2021 4:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in ,Lasaad, love the message within. . Hugs and lots of Love Eve
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Date: 12/5/2021 4:56:00 AM
Your poem reads like a solemn prayer my friend. Much inspiration and longing emanate through your words, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/5/2021 1:01:00 AM
A very inspirational poem we all need to study carefully how our lives are unfolding. Best for a win.
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