Jannie Breedt Poet Free verse

Through Permeating Leaves

-Through Permeating Leaves-

Old sun Buttercup, through permeating leaves
All my bugger-ups please forgive me please
Forgive me like a candle when it glows
Forgive me like a whistle when it blows

I’ve wandered  through a canyon
And have walked through crooked hills
 I shout out my confession to the voices in my head

Rolling empty canyon kept calling back at me
He said he wishing I was dead
But the sun kept coming up
Reminding of these
A sun struck yellow gold
Through permeating leaves

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Paloma P November 19, 2016 at 7:36 AM There's hope 'tween the lines of this poetry, reminds me of wildflowers unabashedly crashing through asphalt! 7+ Jannie Breedt November 20, 2016 at 12:03 AM I like the way you think. Stick around for a spell

Kelly Deschler September 23, 2016 at 2:01 PM Everyday when the sun comes up is indeed another gift to us... I really enjoyed the beautiful imagery and rhyming throughout this poem. Nicely done, Jannie! Jannie Breedt October 3, 2016 at 5:18 AM Hi Kelly. Thanks for being so nice. Yes the sun keeps bobbing up " like a red rubber ball"