Through Life’s Clenched Jaw

I have walked the hallways
where minutes gnash like teeth,
each second a pebble pressed
into the jaw of memory.

The air tastes of iron--
memory’s rust,
old prayers swallowed
before they ever touched the light

Yet still - I carry my candle
into the jaw’s dark cavern,
its flame a soft rebellion
against the grindstone silence.

Soft laughter rests in the cracks,
like seeds grabbed
into the frozen earth,
waiting for the frost to release them,
for spring to rise
from winter’s quiet.

I move onward,
not a hostage,
but marrow unbroken,
a hymn rising
through bone and enamel,
singing until the jaw
yields to the light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/18/2025 7:27:00 AM
I can relate with the idea of having a rusty memory. Can't be helped.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 9/18/2025 7:28:00 AM
Absolutely! A “rusty memory” is something we all experience—sometimes it’s frustrating, but it also reminds us we’re human. A little humor about it makes it easier to accept.
Date: 9/18/2025 7:20:00 AM
Laughter helps us get through life's obstacles. Your poem teaches resilience. I enjoy the spiritual message. Thank you.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 9/18/2025 7:27:00 AM
Thank you! I’m glad the poem’s message of resilience and the healing power of laughter resonated with you,.it’s wonderful to hear it brought you both insight and joy.
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