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"Melancholy"  by Susan Lawrence

Premiere Contest WinnerThrough Her Eyes

Through Her Eyes
It’s through her eyes, that hide her cries, one sees into her soul which feigns the fears and teems with tears that time cannot console. She’s heard the rhymes of ancient times as elders tell their tale; how strangers manned and took the land and claimed to their avail. The tribes were sent without relent, to reservations far, without a thought of anguish brought which fused a lasting scar. As hardships flailed along the trail, they left their trail of tears, and still today they’re held at bay with passing of the years. I wonder how life could allow this girl of tender age to bear such pain without restrain and never turn the page. Perhaps it’s we, too blind to see the truth of yesterdays, and through her eyes we should surmise the error of our ways.
May 22, 2023 A big thank you to Susan Lawrence for letting me post this wonderful piece of art with my poem!
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Wright Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:29 AM
I found this relatable and felt your poem really connected to me. Absolutely love this and glad i found it so thank you.
Gondolf Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 2:35 AM
Thank you, Ailsa, I’m glad you were able to find a connection in my words. It always makes my heart smile when someone reads and comments on my older poems. John
Zahid Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 10:43 AM
It's a lovely poem. Loved it
Gondolf Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Thank you so much, Paghunda, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Bowring Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 12:51 PM
Thought I would pay a visit to one of your earlier poems John - and I’m so delighted that I did to discover this wonderful gem. This is so beautifully written with awesome rhyming and great cadence. So thought provoking seen through the eyes of the young girl and an important message conveyed within. I particularly love the fourth stanza and the last. The last two lines are so poignant.Loved it! Thank you for sharing this emotional write. Hugs and smiles to you :):)
Gondolf Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 12:14 PM
My heart always smiles when someone reads one of my older poems and comments, thank you so much Christina, I’m glad you enjoyed it. This piece was inspired by Susan’s artwork. Hugs and smiles to you!!!
Hind Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 11:54 AM
Indeed. A wonderful and beautiful tribute...
Gondolf Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 4:52 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Paige, I appreciate it. John
Baker Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 3:50 PM
Congratulations on your "Trophy" win, John. It's certainly well deserved, both for the message in the poem and the lovely use of alliteration within. I enjoyed your poetry my friend. My grandfather built school on reservations in several states, and my mother was born on an Apachy Reservation in Globe, AZ in 1926. Thanks for sharing an important reminder to us of the terrible mishandling of indians throughout the Southwest in the past and still today. We have not shown the world Love. Bill
Gondolf Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Bill, I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed this verse. Funny how we criticize countries today for doing the same things we did 150 years ago. John
Nicole Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 12:14 PM
John, congratulations on your top win in this contest. Your words hold so many emotions. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 2:05 PM
Thank you for circling back, Brandy, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Drowley Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 1:49 PM
John, Congratulations on your win. Beautifully captured emotions. For many tribes it has been the moon of the sore eyes year-round!
Gondolf Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 3:30 PM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, David, I appreciate it.
Canerdy Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 6:49 AM
John, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice
Gondolf Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 7:28 AM
Thank you so much, Janice, I appreciate it. John
Lawrence Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 6:26 AM
Back with congratulations on your win dear John ! Wonderful! love, Susan :)
Radice Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 12:32 AM
Susan, I love your art that compliments John's great poem. Cheers - Gary
Gondolf Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 7:27 AM
Thank you so much Susan, I appreciate you. I hope you have a great holiday weekend. Warm hugs, John
Emate Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 5:55 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations.
Gondolf Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Thanks, Thompson, I appreciate it.
Roger  Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 1:40 AM
Beautiful...
Gondolf Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 5:48 AM
Thanks, Roger, I appreciate it.
Radice Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 1:09 AM
Magnificent. Cheers - Gary
Gondolf Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 5:47 AM
Thanks, Gary, I appreciate it. John
Daniel Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 1:00 AM
Such a powerful poem with lovely rhythm, John, congratulations on a top win:) enjoyed this one:) great artwork too by Susan:)
Gondolf Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 5:47 AM
Thank you so much, Joanna, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Lawrence Avatar
May 25, 2023 at 1:26 PM
Beautiful deep poignant words coming from your heart dear John. The soul wound is deep for the Native Americans I have spent time with , however they are resilient and proud and strong and resourceful ! The are educating themselves and embarking on great careers and also keeping their traditions close to their heart and teaching their children the ancient ways . Thanks for being a part of my life and poetry journey dear friend ! Love , Susan :)
Gondolf Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend, I always appreciate your words and thoughts. It is comforting to know that our Native American brothers and sisters are keeping their traditions alive and continue to teach their ancient ways to their children particularly when it comes to nature. I think there is much we could learn from their ways. Warm hugs and love, John
Nicole Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 6:27 PM
Through her eyes, you can see pain, those tender emotions that echo within; along with sadness. Your thoughts touch my heart so deeply, my dear friend. So kind of Susan to let you place her artwork with your words. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 2:55 AM
Thank you, Brandy, for your encouragement and for always supporting my writing, I appreciate you more than you know. Hugs, John
Peck Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 10:01 AM
A very lovely poem, John. First, we tried starving those who were here first by randomly shooting their buffaloes. Then we stole their land and horses, gave their children English names and taught them to be like us. And many still starve. children to\\ school
Gondolf Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 2:52 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Ann, I appreciate it. John
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