Through Good and ... Good

Step by step, I steadily aged with time and wisdom.
I appreciatively obliged old bones to bow before kindred, king and kingdom.
Thank you mama for cleaning my snotty scum, 
thank you for caring when childish tears like rivers run, 
thank you for the sweet dukunu, the roasted breadfruit and the curried coconut rundung.
Thank you mama for reading Hans Anderson, and for repeating the giant’s fee fi foe fum;
thank you for the loud years of laughter and the many more to come. 
Thank you Big Dee for your bald-faced lying tongue;
thank you for being the reason I fled the gruesome ghettos of Kingston. 
Thank you creator for the many astounding things you’ve done:  
thank you for the death of pride, this bona fide self martyrdom; 
thank you Lord for my faithful consort, my daughters and my sons.
Through these streets my mind roams like fields of wild Sweet Alyssum; 
these streets like colleges spiraled from the sun stirred asylum. 





Dukunu is a cake made from banana and/or corn meal, coconut milk, raisins, cinnamon, nutmeg, 
brown sugar, vanilla, and eggs. The dough is wrapped in steamed banana leaves and then 
boiled.
Breadfruit is a large fruit that can be boiled or baked/roasted like a potato; it taste like bread 
when baked/roasted.
Rundung is a sauce made from coconut and Jamaican herbs and spices.
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Brown Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 12:02 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Earle. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 4:28 AM
Love your poem!! you did a great job with this contest!! I have been working on one and it is sounding corny to me.
Nutter Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 3:16 AM
Enjoyed this read, took me back to my home where a thank you prayer was offered before every meal. It was known as the thank you prayer. Excellent piece.
Mehta Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 3:01 AM
Well written and interesting write, Earle
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