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Through Bare Willow Limbs

through bare willow limbs
on this cold cloudy fall morn..
one star twinkles bright

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Lucilla Carrillo

December 6, 2012 at 4:00 PM

Very good Sara. I like it. I think we saw the same star. Lucilla

The Situation

December 6, 2012 at 10:35 AM

My favorite tree. I just only now decided.

Poet Destroyer A

December 5, 2012 at 9:13 PM

Sara, i tried another haiku... wish i could think of them like this... oh well... glad the haiku i tried, was allowed on braking the rules.... love this view...always~PD

Richard Palmer

December 5, 2012 at 7:03 PM

nice write Sara

Debbie Guzzi

December 5, 2012 at 6:29 PM

VERY NICE Sara ;) Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

December 5, 2012 at 2:45 PM

a lovely image you painted!

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 5, 2012 at 2:27 PM

Lovely Haiku, Sara. - Few words becomes a beautiful poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

December 5, 2012 at 1:13 PM

Sara, a lovely haiku, you have captured the essence of haiku very well. Constance

Rollo West

December 5, 2012 at 12:56 PM

Hi Sara, this is truly a great write my friend. Rollo

Russell Sivey

December 5, 2012 at 11:50 AM

Wow Sara, you have nailed the center of a grand feeling with this write! Or is is the middle of several feelings in one! This is so beautiful my friend, I can't put it into words how gorgeous and sentimental this poem really is. I will keep this one in my heart with me! I love it immensely! Great Work!!

Joyce Johnson

December 5, 2012 at 11:32 AM

You have a great memory Sara. I think somewhere in my files I have a poem on the same subject. The funny story on Daddy has been told by all of his kids. But this is a brand new poem and not a repeat. Love, Joyce